Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural, concise and better structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition ("view views"), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "since I live" not "as I stay"), and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. Since I live near the coast, I often photograph beaches and sunsets because the colours and light are really striking. For example, last weekend I took several photos of the sun setting over the sea with people walking on the shore.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and fluency: begin with a direct topic sentence, then contrast urban and rural views using linking words (e.g., "however", "but"). Remove redundancy ("prefer... most") and use more specific detail about what you like in rural scenes (e.g., quietness, greenery). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas. Although I travel to cities for work and appreciate their architecture, rural scenes appeal to me more because of the quiet countryside, open fields and fresh air. For instance, I enjoy photographing winding lanes and small farms that feel peaceful and timeless.

Sugerencia: Clarify tense and make the progression of opinion logical. Start with a clear statement about past preference, then use a linking phrase (e.g., "however" or "now") to explain the change and give a specific reason or example (pollution affecting beaches, skyline). Keep it concise and avoid repetition ("prefer... prefer").

Ejemplo: I used to prefer views in my own country, especially coastal landscapes, because they felt pristine. However, recently rising pollution has spoiled some of those places, so now I would choose to visit other countries for cleaner beaches and better skies.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views so as I stay near to the coast the view views are just mesmerizing.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, and since I stay near the coast, the views are just mesmerizing.

The original sentence run-on uses 'so as' incorrectly and repeats 'view'. Use 'since' or 'because' to indicate reason and join clauses with a conjunction and comma. Also change 'view views' to plural 'views' and add commas to separate clauses for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× Almost on all weekends I go to beaches, weather, sunset is quite beautiful.

✓ Almost every weekend I go to the beaches; the weather and sunsets are quite beautiful.

The phrase 'Almost on all weekends' is unidiomatic; use 'Almost every weekend.' The original incorrectly joins ideas with commas creating a comma splice. Separate into two coordinated clauses and correct nouns: 'beaches' needs 'the' or 'to beaches' can be 'to the beaches'; 'sunset' should be plural 'sunsets' to match general statement. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× As me residing in rural area, I prefer rural area most.

✓ As I reside in a rural area, I prefer rural areas the most.

Use subject pronoun 'I' rather than 'me' and correct verb form 'reside' for present simple. Add articles: 'a rural area' and pluralize 'rural areas' if speaking generally, and use 'the most' for emphasis. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× I often travel to urban areas for my work purpose and views.

✓ I often travel to urban areas for work and to see different views.

'For my work purpose' is unidiomatic; use 'for work.' Also add 'to see' to clarify purpose 'and views.' This corrects prepositional and phrase usage. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× There are also quite beautiful.

✓ They are also quite beautiful.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrect here because the subject (views or places) was implied earlier. Use 'they' to refer back to 'views' or 'areas.' The original lacks a clear subject. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× But rural areas have a different kind of vibe which I prefer the most.

✓ Rural areas have a different kind of vibe that I prefer the most.

Starting with 'But' is acceptable in speech but can be omitted; use 'that' (or 'which' with a comma if non-defining) to introduce the relative clause. The sentence structure is improved by removing the initial conjunction and ensuring the relative clause is correctly linked. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× To be honest, I preferred the views in my country up till now but with the increasing pollution, the views are not that attractive anymore and I would prefer other countries over mine now.

✓ To be honest, I have preferred the views in my country until now, but with increasing pollution the views are not as attractive anymore, and I would prefer other countries to mine now.

'Preferred' should be present perfect 'have preferred' to connect past preference with the present moment ('up till now'). Use 'until now' not 'up till now' for formality, and 'not as attractive' is the correct comparative structure. Also use 'prefer other countries to mine' or 'prefer other countries over mine' consistently; 'to mine' is more idiomatic here. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)