Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, reduce hesitations and add a clear topic sentence. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Pronouns and plural/singular forms should be accurate (e.g., "pictures", "children from hill tribes I used to photograph").

Ejemplo: I don't usually take pictures of views; I prefer photographing people. For example, I enjoy taking portraits of children from hill-tribe villages because their expressions and traditional clothes tell interesting stories.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, use linking words to list examples, and be specific. Improve grammar (e.g., "I prefer rural views to urban ones") and use varied vocabulary (scenery, landscapes, coastline).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the natural landscapes are more peaceful. For example, I enjoy mountain ranges, winding rivers and sandy coastlines, which offer fresh air and beautiful scenery for photography.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, remove repetitions and hesitations, and provide a specific comparison with reasons. Correct grammar ("my country", "overseas"), and use linking words like "because" or "for example" to structure the response.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries to those in my country because European landscapes tend to be more varied. For example, when I visited Switzerland I was impressed by the dramatic Alps and clear lakes, which felt very different from the scenery at home.

× Actually, I don't like taking picture of different views because I prefer to take picture of people more than views.

✓ Actually, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I prefer to take pictures of people more than views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to taking photographs in general (countable noun used in a general sense), and both instances need plural form to match meaning. Use plural when speaking about things in general (e.g., 'take pictures'). Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when referring to photographs in general; ensure number agreement between verbs and nouns.

× I love to take umm, picture of children, especially umm the children from hill tribes as I used to.

✓ I love taking pictures of children, especially the children from hill tribes, as I used to.

When expressing enjoyment of an activity, the gerund form 'taking' is more natural than the infinitive 'to take'. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' and 'the' is needed before 'children from hill tribes'. 'As I used to' implies a past habit; punctuation and word order were adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'love doing' + gerund for activities you enjoy and keep countable nouns plural when referring generally.

× For me, I prefer views in rural areas more than urban because uh, I can see the nice scenery of nature is like mountain, rivers, maybe seas or sand or something like that.

✓ For me, I prefer views in rural areas more than urban areas because I can see nice natural scenery like mountains, rivers, maybe the sea or beaches.

Plural forms 'mountains' and 'rivers' are needed when speaking generally. 'Urban' should be 'urban areas' for parallel structure. 'The nice scenery of nature is like' is awkward; use 'nice natural scenery like'. 'Sea' often takes 'the' when referring generally; 'beaches' is clearer than 'sand or something like that'. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure ('rural areas' and 'urban areas'), use plural nouns for general references, and prefer precise nouns like 'sea' or 'beaches'.

× To be honest, I prefer views, uh, in other countries more than my countries because when I visit oversea like Switzerland or umm, uh, many countries in Europe and I, I love the views in Europe more than in my country.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the views in other countries more than the views in my country because when I visit overseas places like Switzerland and other countries in Europe, I love the views in Europe more than in my country.

Use 'the views' to refer to specific views being compared. 'My countries' is incorrect; use 'my country' (singular) when referring to the speaker's home country. 'Oversea' is incorrect; use 'overseas' or 'overseas places'. Also improve phrasing so the sentence is grammatically coherent and avoids repetition. Suggestion: Use 'the' for specific items being compared, use 'my country' for singular, and use 'overseas' when speaking about foreign countries in general.

× They have the nice scenery.

✓ They have nice scenery.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'the' unless referring to a specific scenery previously mentioned. Removing 'the' and 'nice' placement yields a more natural sentence: 'They have nice scenery.' Suggestion: Treat 'scenery' as uncountable and avoid the definite article unless context specifies a particular scenery.