Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Скажите более плавно и избегайте повтора слов и пауз. Постройте ответ с одним главным предложением, затем добавьте конкретные детали и пример с использованием связок (for example, also, because). Исправьте грамматику (I like to take, when I walk in the evening) и уберите лишние фразы (the the, umm).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. For example, when I walk in the evening I often take photos of the sunset because the colours are dramatic and change quickly. I also like shooting mountain views because they look stunning, and I usually post my best shots on Instagram.

Sugerencia: Сделайте ответ более структурированным: начните с чёткого выбора, затем объясните причину с конкретными деталями и свяжите мысли логическими словами (because, therefore). Избегайте повторов и обеспечьте правильную грамматику (air pollution -> there is air pollution; stars are invisible).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the air is much cleaner there, so landscapes and night skies look clearer. For example, in the countryside I can often photograph stars and wide horizons, whereas in cities pollution and light make stars invisible in photos.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте мнение ясно и логично: начните с однозначного утверждения, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Уберите повторы и исправьте грамматику (a views -> views; neither than tourists -> unlike recent tourists). Используйте связки (because, so, unlike).

Ejemplo: I prefer seeing views in other countries because when I live somewhere for a long time I stop noticing its beauty. For instance, tourists often admire places I take for granted, so I enjoy travelling abroad to discover new landscapes and perspectives.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views. For example, when I walk around the when I walk in the evening, I really like take a picture of a sunset.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views. For example, when I walk in the evening, I really like taking a picture of a sunset.

The verb 'like' followed by another verb requires the -ing form (gerund). 'Like take' is incorrect; it should be 'like taking'. Also remove the duplicated phrase 'when I walk around the when I walk' to avoid redundancy and ensure clarity.

× Or when I walk in the mountains, I really like the view.

✓ When I walk in the mountains, I really like the views.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but 'the view' is less natural when speaking generally about mountain scenery; using the plural 'views' matches the earlier 'pictures of different views' and general context. This addresses consistency and natural expression.

× It's stunning and I really want to post it in the Instagram.

✓ It's stunning and I really want to post it on Instagram.

We do not use the definite article with most social media platform names: say 'on Instagram' not 'in the Instagram'. Also use the preposition 'on' to indicate posting to a platform.

× It depends, but I really like views in the rural areas because the air is clear, but in urban areas the the air pollution.

✓ It depends, but I really like views in rural areas because the air is clear, while in urban areas there is air pollution.

Do not use 'the' before 'rural areas' in general statements. The phrase 'the the air pollution' contains a duplicated 'the' and lacks a verb; use 'there is air pollution' to state existence. This fixes article use and sentence completeness.

× That's why I can't see the stars. So in the picture they're invisible.

✓ That's why I can't see the stars, so they are invisible in pictures.

Pronoun 'they're' is acceptable but the sentence order is awkward. Reordering to 'they are invisible in pictures' clarifies the subject (the stars) and the context (in pictures). Also combine into one sentence for fluency.

× Uh, I would prefer a views in other countries because I get used to my own country and that's why I can't see the beauty of my country and umm neither than tourists that came came recently and see the beauty of my country and that's why I want to visit other countries.

✓ I would prefer views in other countries because I am used to my own country and that's why I can't see its beauty as recently arrived tourists can, so I want to visit other countries.

Remove the incorrect indefinite article 'a' before the plural 'views'. Use 'am used to' (present state) rather than 'get used to'. Replace 'neither than tourists that came came recently and see the beauty of my country' with a clearer comparative clause: 'as recently arrived tourists can'. Fix repeated word 'came' and use the possessive pronoun 'its' for 'my country's beauty'. These changes correct article use, verb tense, repetition, and improve clarity.