Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and relevant, but a bit long and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail (e.g., a favorite type of view or recent example) using a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., “capture,” “scenery,” “share”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel, because they help me remember special moments. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over the seaside and shared it with my family, which sparked a conversation about our last holiday.

Sugerencia: The answer is understandable but contains grammar errors, repetition, and unclear parts. Begin with a clear preference (or say you like both) and provide a specific, coherent example. Use correct grammar (e.g., “views in both areas,” “give a different feeling,” “I preferred taking shots of urban scenes”) and linking words like “for example” or “however.” Keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views in both urban and rural areas because each offers a different atmosphere. For example, on a recent family trip I preferred photographing urban scenes—busy streets and architecture—because the light and details made more interesting photos.

Sugerencia: Your meaning is clear but phrasing is awkward and overly negative about your country. Use a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give a specific reason or example. Replace vague phrases (“that I also can take pictures of them”) with concise expressions and include a linking word like “because” or “for instance.”

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they often offer more varied landscapes and landmarks. For instance, when I visited Italy I found many picturesque streets and historic sites that made my photos more interesting than places I usually see at home.

× I prefer views on both areas because I really think that those views gives a better feeling when you take shots on them.

✓ I prefer views in both areas because I really think that those views give a better feeling when you take shots of them.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'views' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Preposition choice: use 'in both areas' rather than 'on both areas'. Also use 'shots of them' instead of 'shots on them' for natural collocation. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use collocations 'in an area' and 'take shots of something'.

× Just for example, when I was on a vacation with my family, I preferred much more to. Shot some views in urban areas.

✓ For example, when I was on vacation with my family, I preferred to shoot more views in urban areas.

Sentence structure errors and punctuation: The original is fragmented and contains an incorrect split 'to. Shot'. Remove the unnecessary 'much more to' and combine into a single clause with the correct infinitive 'to shoot'. Also use 'on vacation' (American) or 'on a vacation' sometimes acceptable, but 'on vacation' is more natural. Suggestion: write complete clauses and ensure verbs are in correct infinitive form after 'preferred'.

× So I highly prefer views in other countries because there are many beautiful views that I can really use to take some beautiful shots.

✓ So I strongly prefer views in other countries because there are many beautiful scenes where I can take great photos.

Present tense is used appropriately, but wording is repetitive and slightly awkward. 'Highly prefer' is unusual; 'strongly prefer' is more natural. Also 'use to take some beautiful shots' is incorrect collocation — you don't 'use views to take shots'; rather, you 'take photos of scenes' or 'take shots of views'. Suggestion: simplify and avoid repetition by replacing 'views' or 'beautiful' with synonyms and use natural verb-object collocations like 'take photos of' or 'shoot scenes'.

× Unfortunately, I have to say that in my country I don't really have that much of good views that I also can take pictures of them.

✓ Unfortunately, I have to say that in my country I don't really have many good views that I can take pictures of.

Article and quantifier errors: 'that much of good views' is incorrect. Use 'many good views' for countable plural nouns. Pronoun use: remove the redundant object pronoun 'them' because 'that I can take pictures of' already contains the object. Suggestion: use 'many' with plural countable nouns and avoid redundancy by not repeating objects with pronouns.

× I prefer views on both areas because I really think that those views gives a better feeling when you take shots on them.

✓ I prefer views in both areas because I really think that those views give a better feeling when you take shots of them.

Incorrect preposition use: 'on both areas' should be 'in both areas'. Also 'take shots on them' is not the natural collocation; use 'take shots of them'. Suggestion: use 'in' with areas/regions and 'take shots of' when photographing something.

× I prefer views in my country or in other countries? (context: Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?) Student: Unfortunately, I have to say that in my country I don't really have that much of good views that I also can take pictures of them.

✓ Unfortunately, I have to say that in my country I don't really have many good views that I can take pictures of.

Third person singular issue not directly present in this sentence; however, avoid confusion by ensuring verbs agree with subjects. The main issues are quantifier and pronoun use rather than third person singular. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct quantifiers as above.