Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add one specific supporting detail and a brief example. Use linking words (because, so) and reduce hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each photo helps me relive a place. For example, when I look at a photo from a seaside town I visited, I can remember the sound of the waves and the smell of the sea, so the picture brings back strong memories.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Correct small grammar mistakes and avoid filler words. Be specific about what you find refreshing and how rural views differ from urban ones.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer peace and natural beauty. For example, rural landscapes in the countryside have open fields, quiet walking trails, and fewer buildings, so I find them much more relaxing than the crowded streets of Hong Kong.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and correct grammar ("in other countries" → "views in other countries"). Provide one clear reason and a specific example or contrast. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to structure your answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer more variety and unfamiliar landscapes. For example, when I travel abroad I can see different mountain ranges, forests, and cultural sites that I cannot find in Hong Kong, so each trip feels more adventurous.

× I like to came pictures of different wheels because they are all new to me and every time when I, uh, look back at the photos and can, I can feel like I went back to that place and I feel so, uh, realistic and memorable for me to reveal those photos again and memories as well.

✓ I like to take pictures of different places because they are all new to me, and every time I look back at the photos I can feel as if I went back to that place; it feels very real and memorable to look at those photos and remember the memories.

The main verb 'came' is incorrect here; the correct infinitive is 'to take' (Verb + base form). 'Wheels' is likely wrong contextually and should be 'places' or 'views' (wrong word choice but treated as noun error). Remove unnecessary filler and correct clause structure: use 'every time I look back' (present simple for habitual action) and 'I can feel as if I went back' (subjunctive/conditional feeling about past event). Also replace 'realistic' with 'real' or 'very real' and tidy the sentence for natural phrasing.

× For me, I prefer views in rural areas because I'm living a, in a big city is, Hong Kong is an international city, which is named as concrete jungles.

✓ For me, I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a big city. Hong Kong is an international city often called a concrete jungle.

The original has article and sentence structure errors: 'I'm living a, in a big city is' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'I live' for a permanent state. 'Concrete jungles' should be singular 'a concrete jungle' when referring to the city as a whole, and 'named as' is incorrect—use 'called' or 'often called'. Remove redundant phrases to improve clarity.

× We don't have a lot of rural areas and I feel like it would be refreshing for me to explore those places and have a tranquility, uh, for the views, uh, in rural areas.

✓ We don't have many rural areas, and I feel it would be refreshing to explore those places and enjoy the tranquility of rural views.

Use 'many' with countable plural 'rural areas' rather than 'a lot of' for more formal clarity. 'Have a tranquility' is incorrect; use 'enjoy the tranquility' or 'experience tranquility'. Remove filler words and redundant repetition ('in rural areas').

× For me, I prefer views and other countries because Hong Kong is a very small city and you can explore everywhere just within a few years and you can explore all the places that you want to go to.

✓ For me, I prefer views in other countries because Hong Kong is very small; you can see most places there within a few years, whereas other countries are much larger and offer more variety.

The phrase 'views and other countries' is incorrect; it should be 'views in other countries' (preposition). 'A very small city' — 'Hong Kong is very small' is more natural. 'Explore everywhere just within a few years' is awkward; rephrase to 'see most places there within a few years'. Improve cohesion by adding contrast with 'whereas'.

× So in other countries is much bigger and you can like feel a lot of fascinating sceneries that you have never been to.

✓ Other countries are much bigger, and you can experience many fascinating landscapes you have never seen before.

'In other countries is much bigger' has subject-verb agreement and word order issues; use 'Other countries are much bigger'. 'You can like feel' is informal and ungrammatical—use 'you can experience' or 'you can see'. 'Fascinating sceneries' is awkward; 'fascinating landscapes' or 'scenery' is better. 'You have never been to' should be 'you have never seen before' when referring to scenery.