Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, avoid filler words (uh), correct vocabulary (e.g., 'scenery', 'sunrise'), and finish your thought. Keep to 2–4 sentences and give one specific example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery. For example, I like photographing sunrises over lakes because the light changes quickly and creates beautiful reflections. I try to capture the colors and the mood rather than just a generic landscape.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with one or two supporting details. Use linking words (because, however, for example) and correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer urban areas that combine nature and city elements'). Avoid vague phrases like 'ordinary' or 'just doesn't have many things.'

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views that include natural elements because they offer an interesting contrast. For example, a city park with old trees and modern buildings can be more photogenic to me than a plain rural field, as the combination adds variety and depth to the picture.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer and support it with specific, well-structured details. Avoid fillers and small grammar mistakes (e.g., 'my country is Mongolia' not 'in Mongolia'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to make your reason coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Mongolia offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, you can find vast grasslands, the Gobi Desert and vibrant urban areas, so I can photograph deserts, steppes and city life all within a short distance.

× Yes, I like to take a different picture of the different wheels, especially if it's a natural scenery with uh, sun isn't sun rising, something like that. And I especially like to take a pictures with the.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery with the sun rising. I especially like taking pictures with a ...

The student uses 'like to take' and 'like to take a pictures' inconsistently; the gerund form 'like taking' is more natural when talking about hobbies. 'A different picture of the different wheels' is unclear and likely incorrect; changed to 'pictures of different views'. 'Natural scenery' is uncountable so no article 'a' is needed. 'Sun isn't sun rising' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'the sun rising'. Also 'take a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun; corrected to 'taking pictures'. Suggestion: use 'like taking' + plural 'pictures' for general preferences and use 'the sun rising' for the sunrise.

× I think I like ordinary like urban areas with natural wood or something like that. Like it's combined. I feel that rural areas are just doesn't have many things. Everything is just going.

✓ I think I prefer urban areas that are combined with natural areas, such as small woods. Rural areas, I feel, don't have many things; everything is just quiet/slow-paced.

Several sentence structure problems: 'I like ordinary like urban areas' repeats fillers and is awkward; replace with 'I prefer urban areas'. 'With natural wood' should be 'with small woods' or 'natural areas'. 'It's combined' is vague; 'combined with natural areas' clarifies meaning. 'Rural areas are just doesn't have many things' mixes 'are' with 'doesn't' (subject-verb agreement and wrong auxiliary); correct is 'don't have'. 'Everything is just going' is incomplete and unclear; likely intended 'everything is just quiet' or 'slow-paced'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, avoid filler words 'like', ensure subject-verb agreement (rural areas ... don't), and complete ideas.

× Obviously I prefer my own country lives.

✓ Obviously I prefer living in my own country.

'My own country lives' is ungrammatical: 'country' is a place, not a verb, and 'lives' is the third-person singular verb, which doesn't match. Use the gerund 'living' to express preference for residing in a country: 'I prefer living in my own country.' Suggestion: use 'prefer' + verb-ing for habits or states and place the preposition 'in' before the country.

× My country is in Mongolia, it has vast greenlands and Gobi desert and also urban areas, which is quite uh, like mix of the natural things.

✓ My country is Mongolia; it has vast grasslands, the Gobi Desert, and urban areas, which form a mix of natural and urban landscapes.

'My country is in Mongolia' is incorrect because the speaker is Mongolian; correct is 'My country is Mongolia.' The comma splice 'My country is Mongolia, it has...' should be separated with a semicolon or period. 'Greenlands' is nonstandard; use 'grasslands'. 'Gobi desert' should be capitalized as 'Gobi Desert'. 'Which is quite uh, like mix of the natural things' is awkward and ungrammatical; correct to 'which form a mix of natural and urban landscapes.' Suggestion: avoid filler words ('uh', 'like'), fix punctuation, use proper nouns capitalization, and use nouns like 'grasslands' or 'landscapes'.