Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because in my country we don't have this views. I know that in Thailand have very beautiful views and I want to visit Thailand and take pictures of different of you.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I prefer views in urban areas because I rarely go to rural area, so I also like uh, prefer views because a Bunny areas because it's very adorable.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
Oh, in my opinion, I prefer a use in another country because in my country we do have beautiful views for my aesthetic products. So when I go to other countries, I also take for.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Отвечая на этот вопрос, вы должны быть более точны и грамматически корректны. Сформулируйте основную мысль в первом предложении, избегайте повторов и ошибок (например, "this views" → "these views", "different of you" → "different views"). Добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения (например, какие виды вам нравятся: пляжи, горы, городские пейзажи) и используйте связки (because, for example). Ограничьте ответ до максимум 4–5 предложений.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because my country lacks diverse scenery. For example, I love coastal and mountainous landscapes, which I often see in photos of Thailand. I hope to visit Thailand to capture its beaches and dramatic mountain vistas.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок и пауз. Начните с чёткой темы (I prefer...), объясните причину кратко и приведите пример. Избегайте ненужных междометий (uh) и бессмысленных фраз ("a Bunny areas"). Проверьте согласование числа и артикли ("rural areas", "a rural area"). Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений и используйте связку because или so.
Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I live in a city and feel more comfortable there. For example, I like modern architecture and busy streets, which I find interesting to photograph.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Ответ неполный и содержит смысловые и грамматические ошибки. Начните прямо (I prefer...), объясните причину ясно (e.g., I want to see different cultures and landscapes) и приведите конкретный пример того, что вы фотографируете за границей. Уберите лишние слова и исправьте ошибки ("we do have" → "we don't have" или наоборот в зависимости от смысла). Старайтесь давать 2–3 связных предложения.
Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering landscapes and cultures that are different from those at home. For example, when I travel abroad I photograph local architecture and markets to capture unique colours and atmospheres.
× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because in my country we don't have this views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because in my country we don't have these views.
The error is the use of the demonstrative determiner 'this' with the plural noun 'views'. Use 'these' for plural. Also 'do not have' contraction is fine. Suggestion: match singular/plural with demonstratives: this/these, that/those.
× I know that in Thailand have very beautiful views and I want to visit Thailand and take pictures of different of you.
✓ I know that Thailand has very beautiful views, and I want to visit Thailand and take pictures of different views.
Two issues: missing subject for the verb 'have' (should be 'Thailand has') and incorrect phrase 'different of you' which seems to be a mistaken word; it should be 'different views'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb structure (Thailand + has) and use the correct noun 'views' instead of 'you'.
× I prefer views in urban areas because I rarely go to rural area, so I also like uh, prefer views because a Bunny areas because it's very adorable.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I rarely go to rural areas, so I also prefer views in urban areas because they are very attractive.
Errors: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match context; extraneous words 'uh' and 'a Bunny areas' are incorrect and likely mispronunciations. 'Adorable' is odd for landscapes; use 'attractive'. Also avoid repeating 'like' and 'prefer' together. Suggestion: use consistent plural forms and choose appropriate adjectives for scenery.
× Oh, in my opinion, I prefer a use in another country because in my country we do have beautiful views for my aesthetic products.
✓ Oh, in my opinion, I prefer to use views in another country because in my country we do have beautiful views for my aesthetic products.
The phrase 'prefer a use' is incorrect. Use the infinitive 'prefer to use' or 'prefer visiting' depending on meaning. Also sentence is awkward: if meaning is 'I prefer views in another country', rewrite accordingly. Suggestion: decide intended verb and use correct infinitive structure.
× So when I go to other countries, I also take for.
✓ So when I go to other countries, I also take photos.
'take for' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct verb phrase for photographing is 'take photos' or 'take pictures'. Suggestion: use complete verb-object phrase like 'take photos' to clearly express the action.