Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates your opinion clearly and includes reasons, but it is a bit repetitive and slightly off-topic in one sentence (the idea that happiness cannot be photographed is philosophical and could be shortened). To improve, make a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases (e.g. "not really" twice), and give one concise supporting reason with a brief example. Use a linking phrase to connect your reason.

Ejemplo: Not really — I don’t enjoy taking photos of views. I prefer living in the moment, so I usually focus on the experience rather than photographing it. For example, when I travel I spend my time walking and admiring the scenery instead of stopping to take many pictures.

Sugerencia: Your answer contradicts itself (you say you prefer urban views but then cite a love of nature and quiet, which usually describe rural areas). Be careful to answer directly, and make supporting details logically consistent. If you mean urban, explain what kind of urban views you like (parks, skyline) and give a specific reason or example using a linking word.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views, especially city parks and riverside areas, because they combine greenery with nice architecture. For instance, I enjoy visiting the central park in my city, where I can relax among trees while still seeing the skyline in the background.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and specific, but the grammar and sentence flow need polishing (subject-verb agreement and concise phrasing). Use a topic sentence, then add two short, specific supporting details with linking words (e.g. "for example" or "especially").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country. For example, Thailand has beautiful beaches and many mountains near where I live, so I can easily go hiking or relax by the sea. Because these places are nearby, I visit them often and feel very comfortable there.

× And also I love living in the moment and I believe that if you are truly happy it wouldn't be taken into pictures.

✓ And also I love living in the moment, and I believe that if you are truly happy, it shouldn't be captured in pictures.

This sentence mixes a conditional idea with an incorrect modal ('wouldn't be taken into pictures') and awkward noun choice. The speaker likely means that happiness should not be captured in photos. Use 'shouldn't' to express a general belief about what ought not to happen, and 'captured in pictures' is the natural collocation. Add commas for sentence clarity and flow. Suggestion: Use 'shouldn't be captured in pictures' when stating a general opinion about what is appropriate or desirable.

× I prefer urban areas views because I love nature and I just love the peaceful quiet vibe.

✓ I prefer urban views because I love nature, and I just love the peaceful, quiet vibe.

'Urban areas views' is incorrect word order and contains redundant pluralization. Use 'urban views' or 'views in urban areas.' Also add a comma between adjectives 'peaceful' and 'quiet' and between clauses. This fixes noun phrase formation and improves readability. Suggestion: Say 'urban views' or 'views in urban areas' and separate coordinate adjectives with a comma.

× I prefer views in my own country. I live in Thailand, which is in Southeast Asia and we have beautiful beaches and where I live have a lot of mountain and I just love nature.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. I live in Thailand, which is in Southeast Asia. We have beautiful beaches, and where I live there are a lot of mountains. I just love nature.

The original combines several clauses incorrectly and has subject-verb agreement errors: 'where I live have a lot of mountain' should be 'there are a lot of mountains' (plural noun and matching verb). Split into shorter sentences for clarity and add commas. Use 'mountains' (plural) and 'there are' to introduce existence. Also separate 'which is in Southeast Asia' as its own clause. Suggestion: Break long sentences into shorter ones and ensure plural nouns match plural verbs ('mountains' with 'are').