Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và ngữ pháp: sửa lỗi nhỏ (thừa giới từ, số nhiều/ít), rút gọn câu để tránh lặp từ, và giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại góc/mục đích chia sẻ sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views because I want to capture their beauty. I often try to shoot from various angles—wide shots to show the landscape and close-ups for interesting details—so I can remember the scene more vividly.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ: tránh lặp động từ 'prefer' hai lần liên tiếp, dùng danh từ phù hợp (nature, countryside) và chỉnh số nhiều/số ít. Nên nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để làm rõ quan điểm.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy peace and natural scenery. For example, I like walking along quiet country lanes and listening to birds, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện rõ ràng ý, ngữ pháp và mạch lạc: tránh dùng quá nhiều từ thừa ('like', 'a a'), hoàn thiện câu bị bỏ dở. Nên đưa một so sánh ngắn gọn (ví dụ loại cảnh nào ở nước mình khác với nước ngoài) và dùng linking words để liên kết ý (However, for instance).

Ejemplo: I love views in both my country and abroad because each offers different charms. For instance, Switzerland has dramatic alpine scenery, while my country offers unique coastal sunsets and cultural landmarks, so I enjoy both for different reasons.

× Absolutely, I love taking pictures with of different views because I want to capture all of its beauty and have every angles of it.

✓ Absolutely, I love taking pictures of different views because I want to capture all of their beauty and have every angle of them.

The phrase 'with of' is incorrect; use 'taking pictures of'. 'Its' is singular but refers to views (plural), so use 'their'. 'Every angles' is ungrammatical; use singular 'every angle'. Suggestion: remove 'with', change 'its' to 'their', and change 'angles' to 'angle' to match 'every'. Examples: 'taking pictures of the view', 'their beauty', 'every angle.'

× Personally, I prefer a rural area more because I prefer peace and natural more than a busy noisy cities.

✓ Personally, I prefer rural areas because I prefer peace and nature more than busy, noisy cities.

'a rural area more' is awkward; use plural 'rural areas' for a general preference. 'natural' is an adjective but needs the noun 'nature'. 'more than a busy noisy cities' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'cities'; remove 'a' and make 'cities' plural. Suggestion: use 'rural areas', 'nature', and correct article/number agreement. Also add a comma between 'busy' and 'noisy' or use 'busy, noisy cities.'

× Practically, I do love both because each one has its own special views of it.

✓ Practically, I do love both because each has its own special views.

'Each one has its own special views of it' is redundant: 'each' already refers to one of the options, and 'of it' is unnecessary. Use 'each has its own special views.' Also 'views' can be plural but avoid repeating pronouns. Suggestion: drop 'one' or 'of it' to reduce redundancy.

× For example, like Switzerland or like European country, they all have like a a beautiful landscape like lakes or mountains, but in our country also have that.

✓ For example, Switzerland or other European countries all have beautiful landscapes such as lakes or mountains, and our country has these too.

'Like' is overused and unnecessary; remove repeated 'like'. 'a a' is a typo. 'European country' should be plural 'European countries' when speaking generally. 'they all have like a a beautiful landscape like lakes or mountains' is ungrammatical; use 'have beautiful landscapes such as lakes or mountains.' The clause 'but in our country also have that' lacks a subject; change to 'and our country has these too.' Suggestion: avoid filler 'like' and ensure noun-number agreement and complete clauses.

× But we are.

✓ But we do too.

'But we are.' is an incomplete sentence; 'are' needs a complement (e.g., 'the same'). The intended meaning is agreement with the previous statement, so use 'But we do too.' Suggestion: use 'do too' to indicate also/too when agreeing with a verb phrase mentioned earlier.