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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Candidato

Yes I do. I love taking pictures of beautiful scenery such as hills, oceans, beaches, trees and anything that maybe is just hitting the correct.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Candidato

Oh, it doesn't matter. I think that beauty can be everywhere, it's just a matter of perspective. But if I have to choose one of the two, I choose pictures from rural areas because, umm.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Candidato

I would prefer to take photos in other country. I think that I get used with the sceneries here in my home country. So uh, seeing and taking photos of sceneries elsewhere is quite interesting.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Puntuación: 72.0

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but needs more natural phrasing, fewer hesitations, and more specific details. Keep responses within 3–4 concise sentences. Replace vague phrases like "anything that maybe is just hitting the correct" with precise descriptions (e.g., "sunrise over the sea" or "tree-lined paths"). Use linking words to add a reason: for example, "because" or "especially when". Also correct small grammar issues: say "beautiful scenery such as hills, oceans, beaches, and trees" and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I love photographing beautiful scenery, such as hills, beaches at sunrise, and tree-lined paths, because natural light makes the scenes more dramatic. I especially enjoy capturing wide views that show both land and sky, as they tell a stronger story.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Puntuación: 68.0

Sugerencia: Good idea and opinion, but the answer is unfinished and includes hesitation. Give a clear topic sentence, an explicit reason, and one brief example to support it. Use linking words like "however", "because", or "for example" to make the response cohesive. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds like "umm."

Ejemplo: It depends, but if I have to choose, I prefer rural views because they often show open spaces and natural textures that are more calming. For example, I like photographing rice terraces and country roads where the light and patterns change throughout the day.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: Your idea is good and relatable, but the phrasing needs polishing and a more specific reason or example. Correct grammar ("I prefer to take photos in other countries"; "I am used to the scenery here"). Add a sentence explaining what makes foreign scenery interesting, and use linking words like "because" or "so". Keep it concise and avoid fillers like "uh."

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos in other countries because new places offer different colours, architecture, and cultural scenes that I don't see at home. For example, photographing a foreign market or coastal town gives me fresh perspectives and new subjects to capture.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× I love taking pictures of beautiful scenery such as hills, oceans, beaches, trees and anything that maybe is just hitting the correct.

I love taking pictures of beautiful scenery such as hills, oceans, beaches, and trees, and anything that may just catch my eye.

The error involves incorrect modal/verb form and awkward phrase 'maybe is just hitting the correct'. Use 'may' (modal) + base verb 'catch' or 'may just catch my eye' to express possibility. Also include proper parallelism in the list with a comma before 'and' and remove redundant words. Suggestion: use 'may' not 'maybe is', and 'catch my eye' for natural English. Type reference: Verb + -ing form (8) and modal wording.

Present tense issue

× Oh, it doesn't matter. I think that beauty can be everywhere, it's just a matter of perspective. But if I have to choose one of the two, I choose pictures from rural areas because, umm.

Oh, it doesn't matter. I think that beauty can be everywhere; it's just a matter of perspective. But if I have to choose between the two, I choose pictures of rural areas.

The phrase 'choose one of the two' is not idiomatic; use 'choose between the two'. Also 'pictures from rural areas' is acceptable but 'pictures of rural areas' is more natural. Tense is present and correct, so main fixes are preposition/phrase choice and punctuation. Suggestion: use 'between' for selecting from two options and prefer 'of' for subjects of photos. Type reference: Present tense issue (6) and Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

Verb in the present participle form

× I would prefer to take photos in other country. I think that I get used with the sceneries here in my home country.

I would prefer to take photos in another country. I think that I am used to the scenery here in my home country.

'Other country' should be 'another country' to indicate a different single country. 'Get used with' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'be used to' followed by a noun, so use 'am used to the scenery'. Also 'sceneries' is rarely used; 'scenery' is an uncountable collective noun. Suggestion: use 'another country' and 'be used to the scenery'. Type reference: Verb in the present participle form (10) and Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

Singular and plural issue

× So uh, seeing and taking photos of sceneries elsewhere is quite interesting.

So, seeing and taking photos of scenery elsewhere is quite interesting.

'Sceneries' is incorrect because 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not usually have a plural form. Use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun. Suggestion: replace plural with the uncountable singular 'scenery'. Type reference: Singular and plural issue (1).

Vocabulario

BeautifulAttractive
InterestingAbsorbing
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