Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and long fragments.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of city skylines because I like how the light changes at sunset.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference sentence and support it with specific, accurate details. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'rural areas', 'greenery', 'low population') and a linking word to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they have more greenery and fewer people, so the scenery feels peaceful. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields, rivers, and old trees.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific supporting details with examples. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because India has many colourful festivals throughout the year, which create vibrant scenes. For example, during Diwali and Holi the streets are decorated and people celebrate, so there are great photo opportunities.

× Yes, mostly I like to different views in areas I click pictures.

✓ Yes, mostly I like taking pictures of different views in areas where I go.

The verb phrase 'like to different views' is ungrammatical. The correct pattern for expressing preference for an activity is 'like' + verb-ing (present participle), so 'like taking pictures' (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). Also 'click pictures' is nonstandard; 'take pictures' is the appropriate collocation. I also replaced 'in areas I click pictures' with 'in areas where I go' to make the meaning clear. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing and common collocations such as 'take pictures'.

× In my opinion I prefer the fuel of rural areas because they are very greenery and low population with a good natural wipes.

✓ In my opinion I prefer the feel of rural areas because they are very green and sparsely populated with good natural views.

Multiple errors here: 'fuel' is a wrong word; the intended word is 'feel' (sense/atmosphere). 'Very greenery' is incorrect: 'greenery' is a noun, so use the adjective 'green' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 13). 'Low population' should be expressed as 'sparsely populated' (incorrect preposition/phrase). 'Natural wipes' is likely a typo for 'views' (word choice). Suggestion: choose correct words ('feel', 'green') and natural adjective+noun combinations ('sparsely populated', 'natural views').

× I prefer my country because in my country India is lot of celebration, lot of festival in in my country more and more celebration in every week, months, year.

✓ I prefer my country because India has many celebrations and festivals throughout the weeks, months, and year.

The original sentence repeats phrases and uses incorrect structure ('in my country India is lot of celebration'). The correct structure is 'India has many celebrations and festivals' using the verb 'has' to indicate possession/occurrence (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Also 'in every week, months, year' is ungrammatical; use 'throughout the weeks, months, and year' or 'throughout the year'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct verb forms and time expressions ('has many', 'throughout the year').

× But that's why I might I view my country.

✓ That is why I might prefer my country.

This sentence has extra words and wrong verb usage: 'I might I view my country' is ungrammatical due to redundancy and wrong verb 'view' for 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). The modal 'might' should be followed by a base verb ('might prefer'). Suggestion: use the correct modal construction 'might prefer' and remove the extra pronoun 'I'.