Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct plural/ article forms (e.g., "pictures," "scenery"). Avoid filler sounds (uh, um).

Ejemplo: I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel around Vietnam with my family I photograph beaches, mountains and forests to capture memories. I usually focus on the local scenery and people because these shots remind me of the place and the experience.

Sugerencia: Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer contrasts. Give a concise topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and a linking word for contrast (e.g., "however"). Avoid vague phrases like "too many."

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the green fields and quiet forests make me feel relaxed. For example, when I visit the countryside I can walk in nature and hear birds, which helps me unwind. In contrast, urban areas feel crowded and noisy, so they often make me stressed.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer direct and add a specific reason and brief example. Correct minor phrasing and reduce hesitation. Use linking words like "however" or "because" and mention concrete images or activities you enjoy there.

Ejemplo: Although Vietnam has beautiful tropical scenery, I prefer views in Europe because I love the autumn colours and snowy winters we don't experience at home. For instance, I imagine walking through streets lined with golden leaves in October and taking photos of snow-covered parks in December.

× I love traveling and I love taking picture whenever I travel with my family here in Vietnam, we have ocean, mountain, forest and many beautiful skin in the, in various, uh, provinces.

✓ I love traveling and I love taking pictures whenever I travel with my family. Here in Vietnam, we have oceans, mountains, forests and many beautiful scenes in various provinces.

Errors: missing plural nouns and incorrect articles. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to taking multiple photos (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Also the list of landscapes should use plural forms 'oceans, mountains, forests' to match general statement (ID 1). 'skin' is incorrect word choice and should be 'scenes' (incorrect word choice falls under article/adjective but correct as replacement). Added a period to split run-on sentence (sentence structure, ID 26). Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about categories generally and choose the correct noun 'scenes'.

× Views in rural areas is much more interesting than urban area with the green of grass and trees, uh, and I can feel more peaceful and realize whenever I go to rural areas so I love it.

✓ Views in rural areas are much more interesting than those in urban areas, with green grass and trees, and I feel more peaceful whenever I go to rural areas, so I love them.

Errors: subject-verb agreement with plural subject 'Views in rural areas' requires plural verb 'are' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27 and singular/plural issue ID 1). 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to compare like with like, and use 'those in urban areas' to avoid repetition. 'the green of grass' is awkward; use 'green grass'. 'I can feel more peaceful and realize' is unclear; 'I feel more peaceful' is correct. Suggestion: match plurals on both sides of comparison and use clearer verbs for feelings.

× But urban area is in the opposite side.

✓ But urban areas are the opposite.

Errors: 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to contrast with 'rural areas' (singular/plural issue ID 1). 'is in the opposite side' is awkward and unidiomatic; correct phrase is 'are the opposite' or 'are the opposite of rural areas' (sentence structure, ID 26). Also adjust verb to plural 'are'. Suggestion: place adjectives and verbs in natural order and use concise expressions like 'the opposite'.

× It make me stress because of uh too much, uh, too many.

✓ It makes me stressed because there is too much noise and too many people.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'It makes' not 'It make' (third person singular, ID 2 and subject-verb agreement ID 27). 'stress' should be adjective 'stressed' to describe feeling (incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). 'too much, too many' are incomplete quantifier phrases; they must be followed by uncountable/ countable nouns respectively, e.g., 'too much noise' (uncountable) and 'too many people' (countable) (Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 14). Suggestion: specify what is 'too much' or 'too many' and use correct verb and adjective form.

× My country is a tropical country with beaches, mountains, forests and many beautiful scenes.

✓ My country is a tropical country with beaches, mountains, forests and many beautiful scenes.

No grammatical error requiring correction under the provided list; sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and appropriately describes a general truth. Suggestion: keep present simple for general facts.

× However, I prefer views in Europe, especially in the autumn with the yellow leaves and, uh, in the winter with snow, which we don't have here in Vietnam.

✓ However, I prefer views in Europe, especially in autumn with yellow leaves and in winter with snow, which we don't have here in Vietnam.

Minor style improvements: remove 'the' before seasons when speaking generally ('in autumn', 'in winter') and remove filler 'the' before 'yellow leaves'. The tense and meaning are correct (present simple preference), so only stylistic adjustments were made (present tense usage, ID 6). Suggestion: omit articles before seasons and avoid filler words for smoother speech.