Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve accuracy and fluency: correct grammar (e.g., 'I like taking pictures'), reduce hesitations and repetition, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'capture', 'memories', 'playground'). Keep answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually use my mobile phone because it’s convenient and always with me. For example, I often capture photos of my children playing in the playground to keep those memories. These pictures help me remember special moments.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer and then one or two specific reasons. Avoid vague filler words and repetition. Use linking words (however, because, while) to compare urban and rural views and include concrete examples (skyscrapers, parks, mountains, fields). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I like open fields and mountains which feel relaxing, while urban areas have tall buildings and busy streets that can be stressful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear preference and give a specific reason and example. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I prefer the views in my own country because I am familiar with them') and avoid repetition. Mention how factors like weather affect views and provide a short consequence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the places and they feel comforting. However, the scenery can look different depending on the weather — for instance, a coastal view is beautiful on a sunny day but looks dull in heavy rain.

× Oh yes, I like take a picture.

✓ Oh yes, I like taking pictures.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund when expressing a preference or habitual action (like + -ing). Also use plural 'pictures' for a general activity. Suggestion: use 'like taking' for activities and use plural when referring generally to taking photos.

× I think it is very convenient to use the mobile phone to take a picture.

✓ I think it is very convenient to use a mobile phone to take pictures.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before a countable singular noun ('a mobile phone'). For general statements about the activity, plural 'pictures' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'a mobile phone' for one device or 'mobile phones' when speaking generally, and 'pictures' when referring to photos in general.

× As for example when my child, when my children is playing in the playground, I will take some photograph as memory.

✓ For example, when my children are playing in the playground, I take some photographs as memories.

Use 'children' (plural) with the plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Photograph' should be plural 'photographs' for multiple images. 'As memory' is unnatural; 'as memories' or 'to remember' is better. Also use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and plural nouns when referring to multiple items.

× Umm Oh it is. I think it is depends on it's all OK, OK, you can see umm in the other areas there is a different views umm on in my opinion, I think on the difference between.

✓ I think it depends; both are OK. In other areas you can see different views. In my opinion, it depends on the differences between them.

This sentence is fragmented and contains several issues: incorrect 'it is depends' (should be 'it depends'), incorrect 'it's all OK' (contraction misuse), and plural/verb agreement 'there is a different views' should be 'there are different views'. Reorganize into clearer sentences and use proper subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: simplify ideas into short clear sentences: 'I think it depends. Both are OK. In other areas you can see different views.'

× Own the view in my country which is a which I familiar with.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country, which I am familiar with.

Pronoun and word order are incorrect. Use 'I prefer' to answer preference, 'views' plural, and 'which I am familiar with' for the relative clause with correct verb 'am'. Suggestion: place subject and verb clearly and use relative clause with an appropriate form of 'be'.

× It can change it on depend depends on the weather is changing that sometimes the weather is not so good the view it becomes so no so good to me.

✓ It can change depending on the weather; sometimes the weather is not good, so the view is not very nice to me.

Multiple tense and structure problems: use 'depending on' (preposition + gerund) not 'on depend', avoid repeating 'it', and use 'is' for present state. 'So no so good' is incorrect; use 'not very nice' or 'not so good.' Suggestion: use 'depending on the weather' and keep sentences concise: 'It can change depending on the weather.'