Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar and article use, and make sentences more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so). Check noun forms and articles (e.g., 'a serene beach' or 'serene beaches', 'the green mountains' or 'green mountains').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of serene beaches and green mountains so I can look back on them and relive special moments. This helps me refresh my memories and feel positive.

Sugerencia: Be direct: give a clear preference in the first sentence. Remove hesitation markers and correct grammar (e.g., 'more than referring it to be in an urban or rural area' is unclear). Use linking words to explain why (for example, because/so) and provide one specific example of a rural view.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they often feel more peaceful and scenic. For instance, I love wide fields and old trees in the countryside, which make for calming and beautiful photographs.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more coherent: state preference clearly, give a concise reason, and avoid repetition. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'I love winter scenes' instead of 'love the windows'). Use one specific example and link it to personal background.

Ejemplo: I prefer views from other countries because I enjoy snowy winter landscapes. For example, since I grew up in India and rarely experience snow, seeing snow-covered streets and pine forests abroad feels very novel and exciting to me.

× Yes, I really like to take pictures of different views. Uh, sometimes I take the pictures of a serene beaches and Green Mountains, at least so that I can watch it later on and relive the moment again, which will help really help me refresh the memories and also, uh, gives the positivity.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views. Sometimes I take pictures of serene beaches and green mountains so that I can watch them later and relive the moment, which really helps refresh my memories and gives me positivity.

Several issues: 'like to take' is acceptable but 'like taking' is more natural when speaking about hobbies (Verb + -ing). 'the pictures of a serene beaches' has article and number errors (article errors and singular/plural) but main correction used gerund and plural nouns; 'watch it' should be 'watch them' to match plural antecedent (pronoun error). 'which will help really help me' repeats 'help' and uses future 'will' unnecessarily; present simple 'helps' fits habitual actions (present tense). 'gives the positivity' is unnatural; 'gives me positivity' or 'makes me feel positive' is better. Suggestion: use gerunds for hobbies, match noun number and articles, avoid redundant words, and maintain consistent verb tense.

× I think the view matters to me a lot than referring it to be in a urban or rural area. Uh, but umm, I also think that most of the rural views are really admiring and they have lot of beautiful things, so I think.

✓ I think the view matters to me a lot more than whether it is in an urban or rural area. But I also think that most rural views are really admirable and have a lot of beautiful features.

Errors: 'matters to me a lot than' is missing comparative 'more' and misuses preposition 'than' without 'more' (comparative structure). 'referring it to be in a urban' is incorrect phrase and article 'a urban' should be 'an urban' but better rephrase to 'whether it is in an urban or rural area' (sentence structure error). 'admiring' is incorrect form — use adjective 'admirable' (incorrect use of adjectives). 'they have lot of' missing article 'a' in 'a lot of'. Suggestions: use 'more than' for comparisons, use 'whether' for choices, use 'an' before vowel sounds, use 'a lot of' and choose correct adjective forms.

× I prefer views from other countries because I think the climate, I really love the windows. So the snowy white views attracts me a lot. So and I'm from India and we never get to see such weather in there in India. So yeah, definitely I'd like to views from other countries.

✓ I prefer views from other countries because I love snowy white scenes. Snowy views attract me a lot. I am from India and we rarely get to see such weather there, so I would definitely like to see views from other countries.

Multiple errors: 'the climate, I really love the windows' is unclear and ungrammatical (sentence structure error); likely intended 'I love snowy scenes' so rephrased. 'the snowy white views attracts' has subject-verb agreement error ('views attract' not 'attracts'). 'we never get to see such weather in there in India' contains redundant preposition 'in' and wrong placement; use 'there' or 'in India' but not both: 'we rarely get to see such weather there' or 'in India'. 'I'd like to views' wrong verb use; should be 'I'd like to see views' or 'I'd like views'—here 'see views' fits. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, avoid redundant prepositions, use correct verb forms like 'see', and simplify unclear clauses.