Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, verb tenses and article usage; make answers more natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'waterfront station' → 'waterfront', 'tennis stations' likely 'train stations' or 'tennis courts').

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. For example, last week I visited the waterfront and took pictures of the mountains and the river. I especially enjoy capturing contrasts between natural scenery and city life, because they look striking in photos.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then explain with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and vague words like 'scary'—explain why you feel that way (e.g., lack of facilities, unfamiliar environment). Use plural/singular correctly ("urban areas", "rural areas").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and lively streets. For instance, city skylines and parks are easier to access and often have cafes and museums nearby, which makes photographing them more convenient.

Sugerencia: Make the answer concise and grammatically correct. Give one clear reason and, if possible, a small supporting detail. Improve phrasing: 'other countries' not 'others countries'; avoid redundancy. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so').

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because traveling abroad is very expensive for me. For example, I can explore different regions at a lower cost and still find diverse landscapes like beaches, mountains and historic towns.

× Yes, I love taking picture.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because 'taking' implies a repeated or general action of photographing multiple items; use 'pictures' for general activities or countable plural objects. Use plural with verbs like 'taking' when no quantity is specified and the activity typically involves more than one item.

× When I visited new places, I was taking pictures.

✓ When I visited new places, I took pictures.

The past progressive 'was taking' suggests an ongoing action at a specific time, but here the speaker refers to completed habitual actions during visits. Use simple past 'took' to describe past habitual or completed actions. For repeated past actions, simple past is more natural.

× For example, last week I visited A waterfront station and I was taking picture mountains, rivers and tennis stations.

✓ For example, last week I visited a waterfront station and I took pictures of mountains, rivers and tennis courts.

Multiple fixes: 'A' should be lowercase 'a' with correct article usage (Article errors, but main is singular/plural): 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because multiple items are photographed. Also 'taking pictures of' requires preposition 'of'. 'Tennis stations' is incorrect vocabulary; 'tennis courts' is the correct plural term. Use simple past 'took' to describe completed actions.

× I prefer urban area.

✓ I prefer urban areas.

Use the plural 'areas' when speaking generally about urban places. The singular 'urban area' would refer to one specific area, but the question asks preference in general, so plural is correct.

× Uh, I don't like rural area because it is very scary.

✓ Uh, I don't like rural areas because they are very scary.

Speak generally with plural 'rural areas' and match the plural subject with plural pronoun and verb 'they are'. Using singular 'area' with 'it is' is incorrect when referring to rural places in general.

× I prefer my own country's views because visiting others countries really so much expensive so I cannot afford that's why I personally prefer my country's view.

✓ I prefer my own country's views because visiting other countries is very expensive, so I cannot afford it; that's why I personally prefer my country's views.

Multiple issues resolved focusing on plural/singular and tense: 'others countries' should be 'other countries' (plural adjective + noun), 'really so much expensive' is ungrammatical; use 'is very expensive' (correct verb and adjective placement). Add 'it' after 'afford' to complete the verb phrase 'afford it'. Use plural 'views' consistently when speaking generally. Punctuation split into clearer clauses improves readability.