Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because / so). Correct key grammar: use articles, verb forms, and pronouns (I am an artist; I see things differently; I take pictures of everything). Avoid repetition and keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I’m an artist and I notice small details others might miss. For example, I often photograph textures and light in streets and parks, which I find beautiful and unique.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer first (I prefer rural areas), then give a clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words (because, for instance) and correct sentence structures. Avoid hesitations and remove unclear phrases ("my burning village" is confusing — clarify meaning). Keep responses concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I love natural scenery and quiet landscapes. For example, I grew up in a small village where the hills and traditional houses created peaceful, photogenic scenes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (I prefer views in my own country) and support with a specific reason and detail. Use correct possessive forms and country name (my country / Armenia). Avoid vague declarations and repetitions; add one example to make it convincing. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (because, for example).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Armenia has unique landscapes and cultural sites that I know well. For instance, I love photographing ancient churches set against mountain backdrops, which you can’t easily find elsewhere.

× Uh, yes, I want to say that I'm artist and everything.

✓ Uh, yes, I want to say that I'm an artist and everything.

The noun 'artist' is a singular, countable noun and requires an indefinite article 'an' before it. Use 'an' before vowel sounds. Suggestion: add 'an' to form 'an artist'.

× I see another eyes and everything for me is beautiful.

✓ I see things with different eyes and everything to me is beautiful.

The phrase 'another eyes' is ungrammatical because 'another' does not combine with plural 'eyes'. Likely intended meaning is seeing things from a different perspective. Change to 'I see things with different eyes' or 'I see with different eyes'. Also 'for me' is better as 'to me'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I see things with different eyes' or 'To me, everything is beautiful'.

× It's unique and I picture everything.

✓ It's unique and I like to take pictures of everything.

'I picture everything' is ambiguous and not natural in this context; the student presumably means to take photographs. Replacing with 'I like to take pictures of everything' clarifies intent and fits the present habitual tense.

× I taking pictures everything.

✓ I take pictures of everything.

The clause 'I taking' uses an incorrect verb form; the correct present simple is 'I take'. Also 'pictures everything' needs the preposition 'of'. Suggestion: use 'I take pictures of everything.'

× It's very it's very interesting question and I'm sure for my answer and rural areas, one of the most beautiful areas for me was my burning village and.

✓ That's a very interesting question and I'm sure about my answer: rural areas. One of the most beautiful places for me was my native village.

Multiple issues: repetition 'It's very it's very' is redundant. 'I'm sure for my answer' should be 'I'm sure about my answer'. 'Rural areas' needs to be presented as the choice. 'Burning village' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; if they mean their 'hometown' or 'native village' use that. The sentence ended with 'and.' which is incomplete. Suggestions: remove repetition, use 'about' with 'sure', replace 'burning village' with 'native village' or 'hometown', and finish the sentence.

× I'm like on my countries views because my country is the most beautiful country in the world for me and I just love my country, my Armenian, it's everything.

✓ I like the views in my country because my country is the most beautiful country in the world to me and I just love my country; Armenia means everything to me.

Several problems: 'I'm like on my countries views' is ungrammatical — use 'I like the views in my country'. 'Countries' needs apostrophe for possessive or be 'country's', but better to rephrase. 'For me' is more natural as 'to me'. 'My Armenian' is incorrect; use the country name 'Armenia' or 'my Armenian homeland'. Suggestion: say 'I like the views in my country' and 'Armenia means everything to me'.