Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise phrasing. Avoid redundancy (e.g. "pictures of those" and "remember those memories") and limit to about 2–3 sentences. Add a brief specific example to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. When I travel I like to photograph landscapes and city scenes so I can remember the trip later. For example, on a recent trip to the mountains I photographed sunrise views that now help me recall the whole morning.

Sugerencia: Focus on a clear direct answer first (urban or rural or both), then give 1–2 concise reasons using correct verb forms and linking words (e.g. "because", "but"). Reduce hesitations and vague phrases. Use specific details (what you do in each place) and avoid informal fillers like "uh".

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood: I prefer rural areas when I want to relax because I can walk in nature and recharge. But I enjoy urban areas for socializing since there are cafés and events where I can meet friends.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar (e.g. "I prefer my own country"), choose clearer vocabulary ("natural attractions" not "natural attractive sources") and be specific about examples (names of places or types of scenery). Keep the answer concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many natural attractions, such as national parks and waterfalls. For example, I often visit a nearby park where the forests and streams are beautiful and relaxing.

× Of course I do, because when I travel with a different place, I just love to take pictures of those so that when I get older then I can look back through the picture and remember those memories.

✓ Of course I do, because when I travel to a different place, I just love to take pictures of it so that when I get older I can look back at the pictures and remember those memories.

The student used incorrect prepositions and some pronouns: 'travel with a different place' should be 'travel to a different place' (use 'to' with travel destination). 'take pictures of those' is unclear—use 'of it' or 'of them' depending on singular/plural; here 'a different place' is singular so 'it' is correct. 'look back through the picture' should be 'look back at the pictures' ('look back at' is the correct collocation, and plural 'pictures' matches taking multiple photos). Remove unnecessary 'then'. Suggestion: use 'travel to', match pronouns to nouns, and use correct collocations like 'look back at'.

× Well, I, it really depending on my mood, like sometimes, uh, when I feel to recharge myself, I just prefer to, uh, spend my time in rural areas and when I have to socialize with my friends, then I just wanted to live in urban areas and that both make me good vibe.

✓ Well, it really depends on my mood. Sometimes, when I want to recharge myself, I prefer to spend my time in rural areas, and when I have to socialize with my friends, I prefer to live in urban areas because both give me a good vibe.

Multiple tense and verb form issues: 'it really depending' should be present simple 'it really depends' (subject-verb agreement and correct verb form). 'when I feel to recharge myself' is incorrect; use 'when I want to recharge myself'. 'I just prefer to ... spend' is fine but 'then I just wanted to live' incorrectly uses past tense 'wanted' instead of present 'prefer' or 'want'; change to 'I prefer to live' or 'I prefer living'. 'that both make me good vibe' has grammar and word choice errors—use 'both give me a good vibe' or 'both make me feel good'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual preferences, match verb forms, and choose correct verbs ('want', 'prefer').

× Umm, I prefer be with my own country because my country is so rich in natural lands, natural attractive sources like park and local areas, rice fall like that and I just love to spend the day in natural.

✓ Umm, I prefer to be in my own country because it is rich in natural landscapes and attractions such as parks, local areas, and waterfalls, and I just love spending time in nature.

Several preposition and word choice errors: 'prefer be with my own country' should be 'prefer to be in my own country' ('in' for location and include 'to' after 'prefer'). 'natural lands' is better as 'natural landscapes'; 'natural attractive sources' is incorrect—use 'natural attractions'. 'park and local areas' should be plural 'parks and local areas'. 'rice fall like that' likely means 'waterfalls'—use correct noun. 'spend the day in natural' should be 'spending time in nature' (use 'in nature' and gerund 'spending time'). Suggestions: use correct prepositions for location ('in'), choose appropriate nouns ('landscapes', 'attractions', 'waterfalls'), and use gerunds after verbs like 'love'.