Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (use gerunds and articles), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel because they help me remember places and moments. For example, I photograph mountain sunsets and local markets to capture the atmosphere and share memories with family.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more grammatical and precise. Use a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., “beauty” not “booty”), and one or two specific contrasts with linking words like “because” and “whereas.” Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer natural beauty such as lakes, rivers and mountains. In contrast, urban areas have tall buildings and busy streets, which are less peaceful and photogenic.

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Start with a direct statement, then give two clear reasons (cost and familiarity). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “go there are to the other countries”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because travel is cheaper and I know the best places to visit. For example, I can drive to nearby lakes in my car, which saves money and makes planning easier.

× I prefer taking pictures of different views while traveling. It good for me for the remembering this umm, take uh, this help us to take the memory where we have to go.

✓ I prefer taking pictures of different views while traveling. It is good for me to remember places; this helps us keep memories of where we have been.

Missing verb 'is' and incorrect verb forms: 'It good' requires 'It is good' (present tense). 'for the remembering' is incorrect; use infinitive 'to remember'. 'this help us to take the memory' is ungrammatical; use 'this helps us keep memories' and change tense to present simple for habitual truth. Suggestions: always include the correct form of 'to be' with 'it' and use infinitive for purpose (to + verb). Keep verbs in present simple for general statements.

× And how was that beauty at that time? It's good for me. I remember at the.

✓ And how beautiful it was at that time! It's good for me. I remember it clearly.

Sentence 'how was that beauty at that time?' uses incorrect word order and word choice. Use adjective 'beautiful' and the exclamatory order 'how beautiful it was'. 'I remember at the.' is incomplete; add an object 'it' and an adverb 'clearly'. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms and complete clauses with subject and verb.

× I prefer rural areas because there is a natural booty in the rural areas like lakes, ponds, rivers, mountains and so many things.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there is natural beauty in the countryside, such as lakes, ponds, rivers, mountains, and many other things.

'natural booty' is a wrong word; correct word is 'natural beauty' (adjective + noun). Repeated 'rural areas' is redundant; use 'countryside'. 'so many things' should be 'many other things'. Suggestions: choose correct collocations (natural beauty) and avoid repetition by using synonyms.

× So I prefer the rural areas as compared to the urban areas. Urban areas having a long tall buildings, flats not having a natural.

✓ So I prefer rural areas compared to urban areas. Urban areas have long tall buildings and flats that do not have natural scenery.

'Urban areas having' is a sentence fragment; use proper verb 'have' to agree with plural subject 'urban areas'. 'a long tall buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'flats not having a natural' is incomplete; use relative clause 'flats that do not have natural scenery'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article use with plural nouns, and complete clauses with verbs.

× I prefer views in my own country because it's cheap and I know the places where I have to go as compared to other countries because I go there are to the other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because it's cheaper and I know the places to visit, compared to other countries where traveling is more expensive.

Comparative: 'cheap' should be 'cheaper' when comparing. 'I know the places where I have to go' is awkward; use 'places to visit'. The clause 'because I go there are to the other countries' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'compared to other countries where traveling is more expensive'. Suggestions: use comparative adjectives in comparisons and simplify relative clauses.

× It's so expensive and but sometimes I will in my country I will travel with the purse or my personal car as compared to other car.

✓ It is so expensive, but sometimes in my country I travel with my partner or my personal car instead of other cars.

'I will in my country I will travel' repeats future tense incorrectly; context describes habitual action so use present simple 'I travel'. 'with the purse' likely misused for 'partner' or 'purpose'; guessed intended 'partner'—if meant 'purse', use 'with my purse' but more natural is 'with my partner' or 'with my own car'. 'as compared to other car' should be 'instead of other cars'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, avoid unnecessary future 'will', and ensure correct nouns are used; clarify intended meaning (partner vs purse).