Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), avoid grammar errors (use 'interested' not 'interesting'), reduce filler words, and give one specific supporting detail. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I'm interested in capturing unique scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to remember the atmosphere and colors.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct word choices (e.g., 'prefer urban areas'), and give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitations and general phrases; be precise about why you prefer urban views. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because they feel safer and offer convenient amenities. For instance, there are well-lit streets and nearby cafés where I can rest after taking photos.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence (I prefer...), use correct grammar (possessive: 'my country's' or 'my country's tourist places'), and specify examples of places or reasons. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid repetition. Keep answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the tourist sites and know which areas are safe. For example, I often visit historic parks and coastal towns that I know well, so I can focus on photography rather than navigation.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different ways because I'm interesting.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I'm interested.

The student used 'interesting' (an adjective describing things) instead of 'interested' (an adjective describing a person's feeling). Also 'different ways' is incorrect in this context; 'different views' fits the question about pictures. Suggestion: use 'interested' to express personal feeling and use vocabulary that matches the topic (views).

× Uh, seeing the different views because it's my personal hobbies.

✓ I enjoy seeing different views because it's one of my hobbies.

The original is a sentence fragment and mixes singular 'it's' with plural 'hobbies'. 'Seeing the different views because' lacks a main clause. Correct by using a full clause 'I enjoy...' and match singular/plural: 'one of my hobbies' or 'my hobby'. Suggestion: start with a subject and verb and keep number agreement.

× I prefer using urban area because uh, it's more safe and uh less polluted and uh, almost thing uh are nearby as compared to rural area.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they are safer, less polluted, and almost everything is nearby compared to rural areas.

Errors: use of 'using' is unnecessary—'prefer urban areas' is correct; 'urban area' should be plural to match general preference; 'more safe' is nonstandard—use 'safer'; 'almost thing' should be 'almost everything'; 'are nearby' must agree with plural subject; 'as compared to rural area' should be 'compared to rural areas' or 'than rural areas'. Suggestion: use comparative forms (safer), correct plural nouns for general statements, and use precise prepositions like 'compared to' or 'than'.

× I prefer views in our own country because I know about uh my countries tourist palace and fulfill knowledge about that areas which is safe so I prefer.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I know about my country's tourist places and am familiar with those areas, which makes it feel safer, so I prefer them.

Problems: inconsistent pronouns ('our own country' then 'my countries'); missing apostrophe in 'country's'; 'tourist palace' is wrong word choice—should be 'tourist places' or 'tourist attractions'; 'fulfill knowledge about that areas' is ungrammatical—use 'am familiar with those areas' or 'know about those areas'; subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference need fixing ('them' to refer to views). Suggestion: maintain consistent pronouns, use possessive apostrophe, choose correct nouns (places/attractions), and use clear verbs like 'know' or 'am familiar with'.