Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and word choice (e.g. 'photograph' -> 'photography', 'a illness' -> 'an effort' or 'a hassle'), shorten and make answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually don't take many photos; I prefer to enjoy the moment instead because stopping to photograph things breaks the mood. Also, I don't have a great camera, so I rarely get pictures I'm happy with. For these reasons, I mostly soak up the view rather than try to capture it.

Sugerencia: Good structure and content, but fix minor errors and improve linking. Replace awkward phrases ('an energy' -> 'the energy'; 'I'm just on to' -> 'I'm drawn to' or 'I prefer'). Add one specific example to make the answer more vivid and keep it concise (3–4 sentences).

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood: I enjoy the energy and skyline of cities because there are always lively streets and interesting architecture. However, when I need to relax I prefer rural views, such as rolling hills and quiet lakes, which feel much more peaceful. Overall, both types of scenery appeal to me for different reasons.

Sugerencia: Clarify vocabulary and grammar: 'feels' -> 'places' or 'views'; 'curriculars' is incorrect — use 'character' or 'culture' or 'features'. Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points with linking words (e.g. 'because', 'for example'). Keep language natural and avoid vague terms.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each country offers different features and atmosphere. For example, my country has familiar landscapes and traditions that feel comforting, while other countries often have unique architecture and colors that are exciting to discover.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photograph, I usually prefer to just enjoy the moment rather than stopping to take photos.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into photography; I usually prefer to just enjoy the moment rather than stop to take photos.

Original uses 'photograph' (count noun) incorrectly after 'into'. The correct noun for the hobby is 'photography' (uncountable). Also 'stopping to take photos' is awkward with 'prefer ... rather than'; use the base verb 'stop' after 'rather than'. Replace the comma with a semicolon or period to avoid a comma splice. Suggestion: use 'into photography' and 'rather than stop to take photos.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Perhaps I don't have a very good camera or phone so I found it a bit of a illness to try and capture nice photos.

✓ Perhaps I don't have a very good camera or phone, so I find it a bit of an effort to try to capture nice photos.

Errors: 'a illness' is wrong because 'illness' is uncountable or countable with different meaning and needs 'an' if used; however the intended idea is 'a bit of an effort' or 'a bit difficult'. Also tense: 'found' (past) conflicts with present context—use 'find'. Use a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: use 'find' for present and 'a bit of an effort' or 'a bit difficult.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Sometimes I really enjoy the excitement and an energy of city views, but other times I'm just on to the calm and peacefulness of the countryside.

✓ Sometimes I really enjoy the excitement and energy of city views, but other times I'm just drawn to the calm and peacefulness of the countryside.

Remove the incorrect article 'an' before 'energy' (energy is uncountable here). 'I'm just on to' is incorrect idiom; use 'I'm just drawn to' or 'I prefer' or 'I'm more into'. Suggestion: use 'excitement and energy' and 'drawn to the calm...'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× To be honest I enjoy both my country and other countries feels.

✓ To be honest, I enjoy views in both my country and other countries.

Original 'other countries feels' is ungrammatical: 'feels' is a verb or noun incorrectly used. Better to say 'views in both my country and other countries' or 'the feel of my country and other countries.' Add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I enjoy views in both my country and other countries.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Each place has its own curriculars so maybe sometimes I can find the similar or the differences.

✓ Each place has its own culture, so sometimes I can find similarities or differences.

'Curriculars' is incorrect here (likely the speaker meant 'culture' or 'character'). Use 'culture' (singular/uncountable) or 'character'. Also 'the similar or the differences' is incorrect: use 'similarities or differences' (plural nouns) without 'the'. 'Maybe sometimes I can' is wordy—'sometimes I can' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'culture' and 'similarities or differences.' Grammar problem type ID:13