Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit wordy and contains some grammar issues and redundancy. Keep sentences concise (max 5), correct grammar (e.g., "preserve them for myself"), and add a specific detail or example to make it more vivid. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially sunsets, because the colors are stunning. For example, last summer I took a photo of the sun dipping behind the sea, and every time I look at it I remember that peaceful evening. I try to capture the light and composition to relive the moment later.

Sugerencia: The answer addresses the question but lacks grammatical accuracy and clear structure. Avoid vague phrases like "it depends on the place that I am currently in"—be more specific. Use linking words (for example, however, also) correctly and correct grammar (e.g., "a beautiful natural valley" should be "a beautiful natural landscape/valley"). Give one clear preference or explain comparisons concisely.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on the scene. For example, in Shanghai last year I loved photographing the modern skyline because of its dramatic lights. However, I also enjoyed Arching, a natural valley in China, where I captured tranquil river scenes and lush greenery.

Sugerencia: Good idea and enthusiasm, but there are several grammar and vocabulary errors. Use correct plural/singular forms and hyphenation ("snow-capped"). Avoid vague claims like "every beautiful view there it is in the world"—be precise. Provide one or two specific examples of places in your country and use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For instance, we have coastal beaches, snow-capped mountains, deserts, and dense forests, so I can find very different scenes without traveling far. I especially enjoy exploring the coastal cliffs and mountain trails near my hometown.

× They are my favorite and I like photographing them so that I could capture the moment and preserve it for me and then relive it again after viewing that picture.

✓ They are my favourite, and I like photographing them so that I can capture the moment and preserve it for myself, then relive it later by looking at the pictures.

The original sentence mixes modal tense and uses pronouns and phrases awkwardly. 'could' implies past or conditional; 'can' fits the present habitual context. 'preserve it for me' is better as 'preserve it for myself' (correct reflexive pronoun). 'relive it again after viewing that picture' is wordy and repetitive; 'relive it later by looking at the pictures' is clearer. Also use plural 'pictures' to match earlier 'taking pictures.' (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× For example, when I visited Shanghai last year, I enjoyed the modern skyline there and I took lots of pictures of that.

✓ For example, when I visited Shanghai last year, I enjoyed the modern skyline there and took lots of pictures of it.

The sentence uses past tense appropriately, but 'pictures of that' is unnatural; use 'pictures of it' to refer back to 'the modern skyline.' Also omit the second 'I' to avoid repetition in coordinated past tense actions. Maintain past tense consistency. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× And I also visited Arching, which is the natural valley in China.

✓ I also visited Arching, which is a natural valley in China.

Beginning with 'And' is unnecessary in formal responses; remove it. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'natural valley' because Arching is one of many valleys. This corrects sentence structure and article usage. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× It had a beautiful natural.

✓ It was beautifully natural.

'A beautiful natural' is ungrammatical: 'natural' is usually an adjective, not a noun. If you mean the valley had natural beauty, say 'It was beautifully natural' or 'It had beautiful natural scenery.' Choose the form that matches intended meaning. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× I prefer views in my country because it has lots of different ranges, for example, from coastal areas to high snow-caped mountain and desert to forest.

✓ I prefer views in my country because it has many different landscapes, for example, from coastal areas to high snow-capped mountains and from deserts to forests.

Use 'many' (quantifier) with countable plural 'landscapes' instead of 'lots of different ranges.' 'Snow-caped' should be 'snow-capped.' Use plural forms 'mountains,' 'deserts,' and 'forests' for general categories. Rephrase to parallel structure ('from... to...' and 'from... to...') for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× My country have to offer every beautiful view there it is in the world and I love exploring that.

✓ My country has to offer every beautiful view that exists in the world, and I love exploring it.

Subject-verb agreement: 'My country' is singular, so use 'has' not 'have.' The phrase 'every beautiful view there it is in the world' is ungrammatical; replace with 'every beautiful view that exists in the world.' Use 'it' to refer back to 'my country' rather than 'that.' (Grammar problem type ID: 27)