Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более естественно и грамотно: избегайте прямых переводов и словосочетаний вроде "my go on hobby"; используйте связки и уточняющие детали. Уберите шумовые слова (например, "uh"). Дайте более конкретную причину и один пример. Следите за согласованием (например, "their culture" — чья культура?).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I always photograph places when I travel because it helps me learn about the local culture and keep memories. For example, last year I took a series of street market photos in Marrakech to show my friends how people shop and socialize there.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте ответ чётко и логично: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины с пояснениями и избегайте повторов и шумовых пауз. Исправьте грамматику: "air pollution is a little" → "there is less air pollution"; "not suitable for" — нужно закончить мысль (не подходит для чего?).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because there is less air pollution and the scenery feels more peaceful. For example, I like seeing green fields and small farms where people grow organic food, which makes the photos more natural and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Избегайте ошибок в обращении и местоимениях ("you views" → "the views"). Будьте конкретнее: объясните, что именно делает виды красивыми, приведите пример места или традиции. Уберите лишние слова и повторения ("beautiful and stunning").

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because we have diverse landscapes and colourful traditions. For instance, our coastal cliffs and traditional festivals attract many tourists, and I often photograph local ceremonies to capture the cultural atmosphere.

× Frankly speaking, it's my go on hobby.

✓ Frankly speaking, it's my go-to hobby.

The phrase 'go on hobby' is incorrect; use the fixed expression 'go-to hobby' where 'go-to' is a hyphenated adjective meaning preferred or reliable. Use 'go-to' before a noun to modify it correctly.

× I always take pictures when I travel around the world because I want to explore their culture and also, uh, introduce them to my friends.

✓ I always take pictures when I travel around the world because I want to explore other cultures and also introduce them to my friends.

The pronoun 'their' is ambiguous and incorrectly refers back to 'travel'; use 'other cultures' to clearly indicate the cultures of the places visited. 'Introduce them to my friends' correctly refers to 'other cultures' or 'the photos' depending on intended meaning; here 'them' refers to cultures which is acceptable, but consider 'share them with my friends' if referring to photos.

× From my point of view, I prefer to live in a rural area because the air pollution is a little and I prefer to eat natural products.

✓ From my point of view, I prefer to live in a rural area because there is little air pollution and I prefer to eat natural products.

The phrase 'the air pollution is a little' is ungrammatical. Use 'there is little air pollution' to indicate a small amount. Also include 'there is' to form a proper clause describing existence/amount.

× But uh, working and living in in an urban area, I think it's, it is not suitable for.

✓ But working and living in an urban area, I think, is not suitable for me.

The original sentence has word order and missing object issues and a duplicated 'in'. Place the subject 'working and living in an urban area' before the verb 'is' and add the object 'for me' to indicate who finds it unsuitable. Remove the repeated 'in'.

× From my perspective, I prefer you views in my country because it is really beautiful and stunning and every single year we have a lot of tourists that they come and take pictures to explore our cultures.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer views in my country because it is really beautiful and stunning, and every year we have many tourists who come and take pictures to explore our culture.

'You views' is incorrect; use 'views'. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' suits this context. The relative clause 'that they come' is redundant; use 'who come'. 'Our cultures' is better as 'our culture' unless referring to multiple distinct cultures; choose singular 'culture' for the country as a whole.