Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid vague phrases like "mandatory for today's people." Give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach to remember family trips.

Sugerencia: Start with a concise preference sentence, correct vocabulary ("skyscraper"), and avoid repeating ideas. Add a specific detail about what urban scenes you like and use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing city skylines and architectural details. For instance, I like taking sunrise photos from a rooftop to capture the light reflecting on skyscrapers.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct grammar ("prefer views in my own country"), and give specific reasons with accurate examples. Use linking words to make the answer coherent and avoid fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many historic sites and scenic hill stations. For example, I enjoy photographing the Taj Mahal and the hills of Mount Abu because they reflect our cultural heritage.

× Of course, I like taking picture of different views because it is very mandatory for today's people, so most of us are.

✓ Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because it is very common for people today, so most of us do.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' after 'taking' (plural required). Also 'it is very mandatory for today's people' is unnatural: 'mandatory' is incorrect here and 'people' does not need 'today's' with possessive; change to 'common for people today'. Add the auxiliary 'do' to complete 'most of us do.' Suggestion: use plural nouns with activities (taking pictures) and choose appropriate adjectives (common rather than mandatory).

× I prefer views in urban areas because there are many large and sky crapper buildings are there.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are many large skyscraper buildings.

The phrase repeats 'are there' which is unnecessary and 'sky crapper' is misspelled and incorrectly separated; correct form is 'skyscraper' used as adjective with 'buildings' or simply 'skyscrapers.' Remove the redundant 'are there.'

× So after going there we can take many sunset and sunrise views and it is very good to see the sunrise from there.

✓ After going there, we can take many photos of sunsets and sunrises, and it is very nice to see the sunrise from there.

'Sunset and sunrise views' is awkward; use 'photos of sunsets and sunrises.' 'Very good' is vague; 'very nice' or 'pleasant' fits better. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'After going there.' Keep parallel nouns plural ('sunsets and sunrises').

× So it is very good to get photos at urban area.

✓ So it is very good to get photos in an urban area.

Use the preposition 'in' with 'area' and include the article 'an' before the singular count noun 'urban area.' Alternatively use the plural 'urban areas.' The original omitted the article, causing a singular/plural/article error.

× Most probably I prefer use in my own countries because there are lots of heritage sites and there are also some hill station are also there like Taj Mahal, Mount Abu.

✓ Most probably I prefer to travel in my own country because there are lots of heritage sites and some hill stations, like the Taj Mahal and Mount Abu.

Multiple issues: 'prefer use in my own countries' is incorrect — should be 'prefer to travel in my own country.' 'Countries' should be singular to match 'my own country.' 'Hill station' should be plural 'hill stations.' Remove redundant 'are also there.' Add the definite article 'the' before well-known sites if needed ('the Taj Mahal'). This fixes pronoun/reference and noun number errors.

× So I would prefer to use of my own country because this historical.

✓ So I would prefer to travel in my own country because it is historic.

'Prefer to use of my own country' is incorrect wording; 'prefer to travel in my own country' is appropriate. 'This historical' is ungrammatical; use 'it is historic' or 'it has historical significance.' Choose correct adjective form 'historic' and include a verb to complete the sentence.