Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains grammar errors, some redundancy, and slightly awkward phrasing. Improve accuracy (plural/singular, verb forms), use a clear topic sentence, and avoid repetition by using linking words to connect ideas. Be concise and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially the sky. When I travel, I often photograph skylines and busy streets because each city has a unique atmosphere. Also, I like looking back at those photos to remember the trip.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear with misused words and many grammar mistakes. First, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'rural areas' not 'Willow bears') and verb forms. Give one clear reason with a linking phrase, and provide a specific example. Keep sentences simple and coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because there is less light pollution, so the stars are much clearer at night. For example, when I visit the countryside I photograph the Milky Way and it creates a peaceful memory that I enjoy revisiting.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows a clear preference but contains wrong words and awkward repetition. Fix vocabulary ('buildings' or 'views' instead of 'bills'), streamline the sentence, and give a specific image or short reason. Use one linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Japan, because I love the contrast between sunsets and Tokyo’s cityscape. Seeing the sun set behind tall buildings makes me feel calm and relaxed.

× I like taking picture of different views, especially the sky.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, especially the sky.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'taking' here refers to the general activity of photographing multiple views; countable nouns after verbs of habitual action typically use the plural. Use plural to match the general sense (taking pictures rather than a single picture).

× When I travel I often photograph the skyline or crowds because each city has different atmosphere and I enjoy looking at those photos too later to remember the trip.

✓ When I travel, I often photograph the skyline or crowds because each city has a different atmosphere and I enjoy looking at those photos later to remember the trip.

Missing article 'a' before 'different atmosphere' (article error) is addressed here as present tense issue category because the sentence describes habitual action; however the core fix is adding 'a' to form 'a different atmosphere'. Also removed unnecessary 'too' and added comma after 'travel' for clarity. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') with singular countable nouns and keep adverb placement natural ('later to remember' -> 'later to remember the trip').

× I prefer Willow bears because there is less light pollution so there the stars are much clearer at night.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there is less light pollution there, so the stars are much clearer at night.

Several issues: 'Willow bears' is likely misheard; corrected to 'rural areas'. The original misplaced pronouns and word order ('so there the stars') are fixed to 'there, so the stars'. Use 'there' to indicate location and place the conjunction 'so' to connect clauses. Suggestion: choose accurate nouns and place location pronoun before the clause it modifies. Maintain comma before 'so' when joining independent clauses.

× I like to looking at stars in night because when we take a picture of stars we can see query so we should burn that scene in our mind and I like the feeling of that.

✓ I like looking at the stars at night because when we take pictures of stars we can see them clearly, so we should burn that scene into our minds and I like that feeling.

Multiple corrections: 'to looking' is incorrect; use either 'to look' or gerund 'looking' after 'like'—here 'I like looking' is natural. Added definite article 'the' before 'stars' and 'at night' for time expression. Pluralized 'picture' to 'pictures' and replaced unclear 'query' with 'them clearly' assuming intended meaning. 'Burn that scene in our mind' corrected to idiomatic 'burn that scene into our minds'. Use plural 'minds' for 'our'. Also streamlined ending to 'I like that feeling.' Suggestion: after 'like' prefer gerund for habitual actions, use articles with specific nouns, and use idiomatic prepositions ('into our minds').

× I prefer bills in my own country, Japan, because I like the contrast of sunset and the cityscape in Tokyo city and it makes me feel so calm and feel relaxed a lot of time.

✓ I prefer buildings in my own country, Japan, because I like the contrast of the sunset and the cityscape in Tokyo, and it makes me feel calm and relaxed most of the time.

'Bills' is incorrect; corrected to 'buildings' to match context (singular/plural and word choice). Added article 'the' before 'sunset' and removed redundant 'city' after 'Tokyo'. Replaced awkward phrase 'feel so calm and feel relaxed a lot of time' with idiomatic 'feel calm and relaxed most of the time'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, use definite article with specific sunset, and use common adverbial phrase 'most of the time' for frequency.