Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "the reason behind this is" -> "because"; "those few" -> "those moments").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve special moments. For example, I photograph sunsets and cityscapes on my phone so that later I can revisit the scene and relive the emotions.

Sugerencia: Give a direct comparison and use linking words to connect ideas. Remove hesitations (uh) and repetitive phrases. Provide a specific example of what calms you in rural areas to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they are full of natural beauty and peace. For instance, walking beside a quiet river or looking at green hills calms my mind and helps me relax when I'm stressed.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and complete your sentences clearly. State your preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar ("my country has" instead of "my country consists of") and avoid unfinished clauses.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse natural scenery. For example, we have high mountains and lush forests that attract many international visitors, and I enjoy visiting them on weekends.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of the different views.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'different views' when speaking generally. Use no article for plural, general nouns. Suggestion: remove 'the' to say 'different views'.

× The reason the reason behind this is I want to I want to store the memory of those few in my phone's camera so that whenever the memory vanishes, I can go back to those and refresh my memory.

✓ The reason behind this is that I want to store the memories of those moments in my phone's camera so that when the memories fade, I can look back at them and refresh my memory.

Sentence has repetition ('The reason the reason'), awkward phrase 'store the memory of those few', and wordiness. Fix by removing duplicate words, using plural 'memories' for multiple moments (article error/number), and clearer verbs 'fade' and 'look back at'. Ensure pronoun references ('those moments' -> 'them').

× I prefer views in the rural areas rather than the urban areas because the rural areas are full of the natural beauty.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because rural areas are full of natural beauty.

Use of 'the' before general plural place nouns is incorrect. Also 'the natural beauty' should be 'natural beauty' (uncountable). Remove 'the' before 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' and before 'natural beauty'.

× Those beauties will calm my heart and mind, and it will make me uh feel better whenever I'm and whenever I'm feeling bad.

✓ That beauty calms my heart and mind and makes me feel better whenever I feel bad.

'Those beauties' is unnatural; use 'that beauty' or 'the scenery'. Subject-verb agreement and pronoun consistency: replace 'it will make me uh feel' with 'makes me feel'. Remove filler and repeated phrase 'whenever I'm and whenever I'm'. Keep present tense for general preference.

× I I prefer views in my country rather than the other countries because my country consists of natural beauty, natural sceneries like high mountains, green hills, green forests, many peoples from different countries comes to.

✓ I prefer views in my country rather than in other countries because my country has natural scenery, such as high mountains, green hills, and forests, and many people from different countries come to visit.

Multiple issues: repetition 'I I', unnecessary 'the' before 'other countries' (article error), wrong verb 'consists of' (use 'has' or 'features'), 'natural sceneries' should be 'natural scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenic areas', 'many peoples' should be 'many people' (pronoun/number), and incorrect verb form 'comes' should be 'come' (subject-verb agreement). Also sentence fragment at end; complete with 'come to visit'.