Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct, coherent answer and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "No, I don't."), then briefly explain your reason with specific details and linking words. Avoid contradictions and unclear phrases (e.g. "No I do" is confusing). Use correct verb forms and article usage (e.g. "take photos" not "take a photos"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be natural.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take pictures of views. I prefer to enjoy the scene with my own eyes because taking photos can make me focus on the camera instead of the feeling of the place.

Sugerencia: Answer directly which you prefer, then give specific reasons using clear vocabulary and linking words. Replace unclear phrases like "use in urban areas" and "science view" with precise expressions (e.g. "modern architecture" or "urban scenery"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and city skylines. The buildings and public art in cities feel exciting to me, and I like watching how people interact in those spaces.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear preference and explain why with specific, grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words ("um, uh") and incorrect phrases like "use in other countries" or "my own countries." Offer reasons or examples (e.g. different cultures, new landscapes) and keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and landscapes. When I travel, I like discovering new architecture, food markets, and natural scenery that I don't see at home.

× No I do.

✓ No, I don't.

The student intended to say they do not like taking pictures; the correct contraction is 'don't' (do not). 'No I do' contradicts the intended meaning and lacks negation. Add a comma after 'No' and use the negative auxiliary verb: 'No, I don't.' Suggestion: Use 'No, I don't' for simple present negative responses.

× I don't like taking pictures because I think the different views are some beautiful views.

✓ I don't like taking pictures because I think different views are so beautiful.

The phrase 'some beautiful views' is awkward here. Use 'so beautiful' to express the degree of beauty. Also remove the unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'different views' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'so' or 'very' + adjective for emphasis and omit 'the' when speaking broadly.

× You need to building them by your eyes.

✓ You need to see them with your eyes.

Incorrect verb form 'building' and wrong preposition 'by'. Use the verb 'see' and preposition 'with' to indicate using eyes as the instrument. Suggestion: Use 'see with your eyes' or 'view with your own eyes.'

× I think if you take a photos you don't feeling them truly.

✓ I think if you take photos you don't feel them truly.

'A photos' is ungrammatical: 'photos' is plural so omit the article or use 'a photo' singular. 'Feeling' is the present participle; here the simple verb 'feel' is required after 'don't'. Suggestion: Use 'take photos' for plural or 'take a photo' for singular, and use base form after 'don't'.

× I think I probably use in urban areas because I like modern iron and the science view.

✓ I think I probably live in urban areas because I like modern ironwork and scientific scenery.

The student used 'use' incorrectly instead of 'live'. 'Modern iron' is unclear; 'ironwork' or 'modern architecture' is appropriate. 'Science view' is not idiomatic; 'scientific scenery' is awkward but conveys intended meaning—better: 'modern architecture and science-related sights.' Suggestion: Use 'live in urban areas' and choose correct nouns like 'architecture' or 'sights.'

× So the urban has a lot of that we use.

✓ So urban areas have a lot of those things we use.

Word order and articles are incorrect. 'The urban' is wrong; use 'urban areas.' 'A lot of that we use' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of those things we use' or better specify the things. Suggestion: Rearrange to 'urban areas have a lot of those things.'

× I can feel them by my eyes.

✓ I can see them with my eyes.

Use 'see' rather than 'feel' for visual perception. Preposition 'by' is incorrect instrument; use 'with.' Suggestion: Use 'see with my eyes' or simply 'see them.'

× I love for use in other countries because, you know, umm, I'm usually living my own countries.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because, you know, I'm usually living in my own country.

'Love for use in other countries' is ungrammatical. 'Prefer to travel to other countries' fits context. 'I'm usually living my own countries' should be 'I usually live in my own country.' Use simple present for habitual actions and singular 'country.' Suggestion: Use 'I usually live in my own country' and 'prefer to visit other countries.'

× I think, uh, the country's view is very, umm, boring for me.

✓ I think the scenery of my country is very boring to me.

'Country's view' is awkward; use 'scenery' or 'the views in my country.' 'Boring for me' is acceptable but 'boring to me' is slightly more natural. Suggestion: Use 'the scenery in my country' or 'my country's scenery.'

× So I want to, uh, look at the other countries we use by my eyes.

✓ So I want to see other countries with my own eyes.

'Look at the other countries we use by my eyes' is ungrammatical. Use 'see other countries with my own eyes' to express personal viewing. 'With my own eyes' is the idiomatic phrase. Suggestion: Use 'see other countries with my own eyes' or 'visit other countries and see them.'