Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), limit to 2–4 sentences, correct grammar (e.g., 'take photos' not 'click the pictures'), and use specific details linked logically. Avoid redundancy ("carry a memories"/"create a memories").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I visited Manali I took many pictures of the forests and palm trees, which remind me of the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference sentence, then briefly support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because'). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'scenery' instead of 'viewing') and avoid vague phrases like 'less viewing there'.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the natural scenery is more relaxing and varied. However, urban areas can also be attractive because of interesting architecture and city lights, which offer a different kind of beauty.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and reduce hesitation. State your preference in one clear sentence, then give specific supporting examples and a brief reason. Avoid fillers ('uh') and repetitive words ('prefer' twice).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes such as forests and hill stations. For instance, I often relax and take photos of nearby hill scenery and distinctive industrial architecture that I find visually interesting.

× Definitely be careful.

✓ Definitely, be careful.

This sentence is unclear and incomplete. The student likely intended an assertion like 'Definitely' to agree, or an instruction 'Be careful.' Keeping both requires a comma. However in context the student should say something like 'Definitely.' or 'I definitely do.' Suggestion: choose a complete sentence such as 'Definitely.' or 'I definitely like taking pictures.' Note: This item primarily involves sentence structure (ID 26) and verb presence (ID 23).

× Whenever I see a good view, I click the pictures to carry a memories and create a memories.

✓ Whenever I see a good view, I take pictures to preserve a memory and create memories.

Problems: wrong verb 'click the pictures' (informal; 'take pictures' is idiomatic) and article + plural errors with 'a memories' and 'create a memories.' Use singular 'a memory' or uncountable 'memories' without 'a.' This matches singular/plural (ID 1), article errors (ID 22), and verb choice (ID 26). Suggestion: use 'take pictures' and 'preserve a memory' or simply 'create memories.'

× There are a number of pictures I collect like when I went to the Manali, I collect a lot of picture of nature related with the palm trees as well as some breathing.

✓ There are a number of pictures I collected; for example, when I went to Manali, I collected a lot of pictures of nature, including palm trees and some breathtaking views.

Problems: inconsistent tense (present 'collect' vs past 'went') — use past 'collected' to match 'went' (ID 5). 'the Manali' incorrect article (ID 22) — use 'Manali' without 'the.' 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (ID 1). 'related with' is incorrect preposition; use 'including' or 'with' (ID 11). 'some breathing' is incorrect word choice; likely 'breathtaking views.' Suggestion: keep past tense and correct plurals and prepositions.

× Felt they both have their own values because urban areas are filled with the crowd as well as industrialization increases day by day so they're less viewing there but some good buildings are giving better view but as compared to the rural areas they're filled with the natural views that I liked.

✓ I feel they both have their own value because urban areas are crowded and industrialization is increasing day by day, so there is less to see there; although some buildings provide good views, rural areas are filled with natural scenery that I like.

Problems: missing subject 'I' ('Felt' should be 'I feel' or 'I felt') (ID 12/26). 'the crowd' should be 'crowded' (adjective misuse) or 'filled with crowds' (ID 13). 'industrialization increases' should be 'industrialization is increasing' to show ongoing change (present continuous) (ID 6). 'less viewing' is incorrect noun usage; use 'less to see' (ID 13). 'they're filled with the natural views that I liked' mixes tenses and pronouns; use present 'that I like' and remove 'the' (ID 1/5/22). Suggestion: use clear subject, correct adjective forms, consistent tense, and natural collocations like 'crowded' and 'natural scenery.'

× Well, I live in a good country with a lot of better views, so I prefer to see my own country views like the forest areas, hill stations as well as some industrial architectures that help me to keep uh, relaxing and clicking a lot of pictures there.

✓ Well, I live in a great country with many beautiful views, so I prefer to see views in my own country, such as forests, hill stations, and some industrial architecture that helps me relax and take a lot of pictures there.

Problems: 'a lot of better views' incorrect modifier — use 'many beautiful views' (ID 13). 'my own country views' should be 'views in my own country' (preposition/pronoun order) (ID 11/12). 'the forest areas' -> 'forests' (article and plural) (ID 22/1). 'industrial architectures' wrong plural and word choice; 'industrial architecture' is uncountable (ID 1/13). 'help me to keep uh, relaxing and clicking' ungrammatical: use 'helps me relax and take a lot of pictures' (infinitive or bare infinitive after 'help') (ID 8/9). Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives, correct pluralization, consistent collocation 'helps me relax and take photos.'

× So I prefer.

✓ So I prefer my country's views.

'So I prefer' is incomplete and vague; it should specify what is preferred (ID 26). Suggestion: complete the sentence with the object, e.g., 'I prefer my country's views.'