Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatically accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct word order. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and add one specific detail about what you photograph. Use linking words if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to other countries. For example, I often photograph street scenes and local markets with my film camera because they capture everyday life and unique colors.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Avoid short fragmented sentences and unclear comparisons. Use linking words (for example, because, whereas) and provide a specific reason and one concrete example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy dramatic city skylines and lively nightscapes. For example, the skyline of New York with its illuminated skyscrapers feels vibrant and exciting, whereas the countryside is calmer and less visually intense.

Sugerencia: This answer has serious issues with word choice and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid speaking fillers, and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., ‘views’ or ‘scenery’). Explain why views abroad appeal to you with a specific example. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I like views in both my country and abroad, but I prefer scenery in other countries because unfamiliar landscapes give me a fresh perspective. For instance, seeing traditional villages in Japan showed me different architectural styles and ways of life that I hadn't experienced at home.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures what I see especially when I go to other countries while traveling I. I take photos with my film camera.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of what I see, especially when I travel to other countries. I take photos with my film camera.

The original contains sentence structure problems and incorrect preposition/word order. 'taking pictures what I see' is missing the preposition 'of' (incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11) and should read 'taking pictures of what I see.' 'when I go to other countries while traveling I.' has wrong word order and an extra pronoun; 'while traveling I' should be 'when I travel to other countries' (sentence structure errors, ID 26). Combined clauses need commas and correct verb forms. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of ...' and reorder to 'especially when I travel to other countries.'

× I like their nightscapes and I can feel vibrant and exciting. Compare the countryside.

✓ I like their nightscapes because they feel vibrant and exciting compared to the countryside.

'I can feel vibrant and exciting' misplaces adjectives and subject; people feel something, places are described as 'vibrant and exciting' (incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). 'Compare the countryside' is a fragment and incorrect imperative/context (sentence structure error, ID 26). Correct by making the city nightscapes the subject: 'they feel vibrant and exciting compared to the countryside.' Suggestion: ensure the subject matches the adjectives and join the comparison into one complete sentence.

× I like both, but I prefer beers in other countries because umm, the abuse of other countries can give me a new perspective and feeling.

✓ I like both, but I prefer views in other countries because seeing other countries can give me a new perspective and feeling.

The original uses incorrect and unrelated nouns: 'beers' and 'the abuse of other countries' are wrong choices (incorrect use of pronouns/nouns, ID 12 and word choice). Likely intended 'views' or 'scenery' and 'the experience of other countries' or 'seeing other countries.' This is a semantic/word choice error and sentence structure issue (ID 26). Suggestion: replace 'beers' with 'views' and 'the abuse of other countries' with 'seeing other countries' or 'experiencing other countries' to convey the intended meaning.