Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler phrases like “to be honest”, and add one specific detail or reason using a linking word. Also reduce repetition (e.g. “I capture pictures a lot” is redundant).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking landscape photos. For example, when I visit the mountains I often photograph waterfalls and native birds because I like capturing motion and natural colors.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct statement, then use a linking word to give clear reasons. Avoid vague words and grammar errors (e.g. “in countryside” → “the countryside”; “greeneries” → “greenery”). Be specific about what you like and limit to two supporting details.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in the countryside because they are more peaceful and scenic. For instance, I enjoy seeing wide fields with grazing horses and cattle, and the abundant greenery makes the air feel fresher.

Sugerencia: Give a clear position and precise reasons. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences (e.g. “because it's not.”). Use linking words like “however” or “because” and provide one specific example of what you prefer in other countries. Also correct grammar (e.g. “other country” → “other countries”).

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because many cities here in Pakistan are less well maintained. For example, I admire the tidy parks and historic architecture in the United Kingdom, which make for much nicer photographs.

× I'm a type of person who likes photography and I capture pictures a lot.

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes photography and I take a lot of pictures.

Use 'the kind of person' or 'type of person' followed by 'who' is acceptable, but 'type of person who likes photography' is less natural than 'the kind of person who likes photography.' 'Capture pictures' is awkward; native speakers say 'take pictures.' Also word order 'a lot of pictures' is preferred to 'pictures a lot.' Suggestions: use 'the kind of person' and 'take a lot of pictures.'

× When I go to the mountains, I usually take pictures of trees and birds and waterfalls.

✓ When I go to the mountains, I usually take pictures of trees, birds, and waterfalls.

List items should be separated by commas and use 'and' before the last item. No preposition change needed, but punctuation improves clarity. Suggestion: separate list items with commas for readability.

× Well, to be honest I prefer views in countryside more in rural areas because when I visit countryside I usually see beautiful landscape like I see horses, cows, cattle.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer views in the countryside and in rural areas because when I visit the countryside I usually see beautiful landscapes, such as horses, cows, and other livestock.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'countryside.' 'Prefer views in countryside more in rural areas' is redundant and unclear; combine ideas: 'in the countryside and in rural areas.' 'Beautiful landscape' should be plural 'beautiful landscapes' when referring generally. Use 'such as' for examples and include commas between list items. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'countryside,' pluralize 'landscape,' and use 'such as' plus commas.

× Beside that I see a lot of greeneries.

✓ Besides that, I see a lot of greenery.

Use 'Besides that' or 'Besides' (not 'Beside that') and add a comma. 'Greeneries' is incorrect; the uncountable noun is 'greenery.' Suggestion: say 'Besides that, I see a lot of greenery.'

× Well it depends but as I live in Pakistan, I don't like the views here because it's not.

✓ Well, it depends, but since I live in Pakistan, I don't like the views here because they are not very nice.

The clause 'because it's not' is incomplete and unclear. 'Views' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and follow with an adjective 'very nice' or a clarifying description. Also use 'since' instead of 'as' for clarity and add commas. Suggestion: complete the comparison and match pronoun number.

× The environment is not so clean.

✓ The environment here is not very clean.

Add 'here' to clarify location, and 'not so clean' is informal; 'not very clean' is more natural. Keep the definite article 'the' since referring to the local environment. Suggestion: add 'here' and use 'not very clean.'

× People don't keep the city clean.

✓ People don't keep the cities clean.

If speaker refers to multiple cities or the general practice across cities, 'the city' may be too specific. If referring to their city, keep 'the city.' However, context suggests general poor cleanliness across cities; use plural 'cities' for generalization. Ensure subject-verb agreement remains with 'don't.' Suggestion: choose 'the city' (if one city) or 'cities' (general) to match intended meaning.

× That's why I love views from other country for for example I love the views in the United Kingdom.

✓ That's why I love views from other countries; for example, I love the views in the United Kingdom.

Use plural 'countries' after 'other.' Remove duplicate 'for.' Add punctuation and a comma after 'for example.' Suggestion: use 'from other countries' and punctuate the example clearly.