Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with correct grammar and varied vocabulary. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of new scenes because I’m naturally curious. For example, when I travel to a new place I photograph unusual buildings and street scenes so I can remember the atmosphere and study the details later.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and one example. Improve grammatical accuracy (e.g., “I would say urban” → “I prefer urban views”) and tighten phrasing. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because the city lights and busy streets feel exciting and full of life. For example, I enjoy photographing neon signs and crowded markets at night because they create interesting contrasts and tell stories about city life.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use one or two clear reasons and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like “they're seen.” Use linking words such as “because” and “so” properly.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I’ve lived in my home country my whole life and enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I love photographing local markets abroad because they show unique colors, foods, and traditions I haven’t seen before.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially to things which are new to me.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially of things that are new to me.

After 'enjoy' we use a verb + -ing or a noun; 'taking pictures' is fine, but the preposition should be 'of' not 'to' for what is being photographed. Also use 'that' instead of 'which' in restrictive clauses for clarity.

× I like to take photo, take photo, take the photo down to keep it and remember it.

✓ I like to take photos, keep them, and use them to remember places.

Use the plural noun 'photos' for general action. Repeating 'take photo' is redundant; combine ideas into a clear sequence. 'Take the photo down' is incorrect in this context and unclear; 'keep them' and 'use them to remember' express the intended meaning clearly.

× I enjoy views in both rural and urban.

✓ I enjoy views in both rural and urban areas.

The nouns 'rural' and 'urban' are adjectives and need the noun 'areas' after them in this context. Alternatively, use 'the countryside and the city'.

× If you would like me to choose just one, I would say urban because I like the city lights and the busy streets which make me more curious and to look into the city more.

✓ If you would like me to choose just one, I would say urban because I like the city lights and the busy streets, which make me more curious and make me want to explore the city more.

Use parallel verb forms: 'make me more curious and make me want to explore' or 'make me more curious and want to explore' (but latter loses clarity). 'To look into the city' is not idiomatic; use 'explore the city' or 'look around the city'.

× Of course, the views of other country because I have been in my country for a long time since I'm born, so I'm more preferred to explore into a new country and they're seen.

✓ Of course, the views of other countries, because I have been in my country since I was born, so I prefer to explore a new country and see them.

Use plural 'other countries' or 'another country'. 'The views of other country' lacks an article and wrong number. 'Since I'm born' is incorrect; use 'since I was born'. 'I'm more preferred' is wrong voice—use 'I prefer'. 'Explore into' is incorrect; use 'explore' or 'go to'. 'They're seen' is unclear; replace with 'see them' referring to views.