Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban perlu lebih terstruktur, ringkas, dan alami. Mulailah dengan kalimat topik langsung, lalu berikan satu atau dua detail spesifik yang relevan. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau kata-kata yang tidak perlu (mis. 'I get some'). Perbaiki tata bahasa (mis. artikel 'the beach', bentuk kata kerja) dan gunakan penghubung sederhana jika menambahkan contoh.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I visit the beach to go fishing, I often photograph the sunrise and the shoreline to remember the peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Jawaban perlu kalimat topik yang jelas dan dukungan yang spesifik. Perbaiki tata bahasa (jamak/singular, kata depan, artikel) dan pilih kosakata yang tepat (mis. 'fresh air', 'wide road'). Jangan mengulang kata berlebihan seperti 'big big'. Gunakan satu atau dua kalimat pendukung dengan contoh konkret.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the fresh air and wide landscapes, which make for beautiful nature photos. However, I sometimes photograph urban scenes too, especially striking skyscrapers or busy streets.

Sugerencia: Jawaban kurang jelas dan banyak kesalahan kosa kata serta tata bahasa. Mulailah dengan jawaban langsung ('I prefer...') lalu jelaskan alasan konkret (contoh tempat spesifik). Hindari kata yang tidak jelas seperti 'a fuse' dan perbaiki struktur kalimat. Berikan satu contoh spesifik tempat di negara sendiri untuk mendukung pilihan Anda.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a great mix of modern cities and natural attractions. For example, we have vibrant urban centres as well as waterfalls, beaches and mountains that I love to visit and photograph.

× Yes I do because when I take pictures I get some.

✓ Yes, I do, because when I take pictures I get some memories.

Incorrect or incomplete expression: 'I get some' is vague and missing a noun. Use present simple correctly and include the noun 'memories' to complete the idea. Also add commas for clarity.

× I can capture it in my phone and it can be memorable for me.

✓ I can capture them on my phone and they can be memorable for me.

Plural agreement and word choice: 'pictures' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Use 'on my phone' (correct preposition) and 'memorable' modifies experiences, so 'they can be memorable' matches plural subject.

× For example, when I go to beach and I go to fish, I will capture it with my camera.

✓ For example, when I go to the beach and go fishing, I will capture it with my camera.

Prepositions and verb form: English requires 'the beach' with definite article. Use gerund 'fishing' after 'go' rather than 'go to fish'. Keep 'capture it' if referring to a scene, but better to match plural 'capture them' if pictures.

× I prefer views in rural area because I can breathe in this in the fresh air and I get a beautiful views of natural pictures.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I can breathe in the fresh air and I get beautiful natural views.

Articles, number agreement and word order: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. Remove extra 'in this in'. Use 'the fresh air' with definite article. 'a beautiful views' is ungrammatical; use 'beautiful natural views' or 'a beautiful natural view'.

× But sometimes I take picture in urban area for a big big building or just it's tall and wide Rd.

✓ But sometimes I take pictures in urban areas for big buildings, or just because they are tall and wide streets.

Number agreement and pronoun reference: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'. Use 'in urban areas' or 'in the urban area'. 'big big' is informal repetition; one 'big' is enough. 'it's tall' incorrectly uses singular pronoun and contraction; refer to 'they are' for plural 'buildings' or 'streets'. 'Rd' should be 'road' or 'roads'.

× I like both of them but my favorite 1 is a fuse in my country.

✓ I like both, but my favorite is in my country.

Unclear phrasing and extraneous characters: 'favorite 1' and 'is a fuse' are incorrect or nonsensical. Remove '1' and 'a fuse' and clarify 'my favorite is in my country'.

× For example my country has a big city and why and many natural places such as waterfall or beach or just mountain so I prefer know about my.

✓ For example, my country has a big city and many natural places such as waterfalls, beaches, and mountains, so I prefer to learn about my country.

Coherence, word choice and verb forms: 'and why' is incorrect; likely filler. Use plural nouns 'waterfalls, beaches, and mountains'. 'I prefer know about my' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer to learn about my country' or 'I prefer knowing about my country'.