Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with word choice and sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'pews' → 'views'). Use linking words to add a brief reason or example and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Also correct tense and article usage: 'sometimes I print them' or 'sometimes I have them printed'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially beaches and mountains. For example, I often photograph interesting restaurants or street scenes when I travel. I usually post my best photos on social media or have a few printed to put in albums.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise direct answer first, then give one or two clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and phrasing (e.g., 'there are more stunning views and they are aesthetically pleasing'). Avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I visit cities more often and enjoy the variety of architecture and street life. For instance, city skylines, colorful markets, and modern buildings often look more striking to me than rural landscapes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and organize supporting details with linking words. Avoid short repetitive sentences; combine related ideas to sound more natural. Mention a specific reason why you prefer other countries and give one concrete example of a memorable experience.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different cultures and landscapes. For example, I visited Thailand and Japan — I loved Japan most because I traveled there alone and enjoyed exploring its temples and urban scenery, which felt unique compared to home.

× Yes I like taking pictures of different pews like beaches and mountains and also just random scenery like restaurants that I find beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, like beaches and mountains, and also of random scenery such as restaurants that I find beautiful.

The student wrote 'pews' instead of 'views' (wrong word choice) and omitted commas and prepositions. This is an incorrect use of words and sentence structure; classify as adjective/adverb misuse because the descriptive structure is awkward. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'views', include commas to separate items, and use 'of' before 'random scenery' and 'such as' for examples to make the sentence clear. Note: The correction keeps present habitual tense appropriate for likes.

× I do love taking pictures sometimes I printed them or posted them on my social media.

✓ I do love taking pictures; sometimes I print them or post them on my social media.

The original uses past tense verbs 'printed' and 'posted' together with a present habitual context ('I do love'), which is inconsistent. This is an issue with verb form choice (past participle/past simple used incorrectly). Suggestion: use the present simple 'print' and 'post' to match the habitual action, and join clauses with a semicolon or conjunction for clarity.

× I think I prefer views in urban areas as I went to urban areas more often than I went to rural areas and I think there are just more stunning and is aesthetically pleasing to the eyes.

✓ I think I prefer views in urban areas, as I go to urban areas more often than I go to rural areas, and I think they are simply more stunning and aesthetically pleasing.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with a general preference that should use present simple 'go'. Also there is a subject-verb agreement and pronoun issue: 'there are just more stunning and is aesthetically pleasing' is ungrammatical. The correct structure uses 'they are' to refer to views. Suggestion: use present simple for habits ('go'), replace 'there are just more stunning' with 'they are simply more stunning', and remove redundancy 'to the eyes'.

× I prefer visiting other countries.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries.

This sentence is correct; it uses present simple to express a general preference, so no change is needed.

× I haven't been to many countries abroad.

✓ I haven't been to many countries abroad.

This sentence is grammatically correct: present perfect is appropriately used to indicate experience up to now, so no change is needed.

× I went to Thailand and Japan and I really, really love it there.

✓ I went to Thailand and Japan, and I really, really loved it there.

The student mixes past tense 'went' with present simple 'love' when referring to past trips. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'went'. If the intent is ongoing love, rephrase to 'I went to Thailand and Japan, and I really, really love those countries.' Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent within the same temporal frame.

× It's so beautiful there.

✓ It was so beautiful there.

This refers to past visits, so past tense 'was' is preferable to match 'went' and 'loved'. If speaking about the place in general, present 'is' could be used, but for describing the visited experience use past tense. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame being described.

× My favorite one is Japan because I went there alone.

✓ My favorite is Japan because I went there alone.

The phrase 'My favorite one' is unnecessary; 'My favorite is Japan' is more natural. This is a minor singular/plural/style issue. Suggestion: drop 'one' when referring to a country to make the sentence more concise and idiomatic.