Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable and directly answers the question, but hesitations (“umm”, “uh”) and an unfinished phrase reduce fluency. Make the response more concise (1–3 sentences), avoid fillers, and add a specific example or reason. Use linking words for clarity if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing sunsets when I travel because the warm colors change quickly and create dramatic photos, so I often arrive early to find the best angle.

Sugerencia: Good attempt to balance both options, but the reply is unfinished and lacks specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (‘I don't have strong preference’ then ‘both of those’). Give one or two concise, clear reasons with linking words and finish your sentence. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference because both offer different attractions. For instance, I like urban views for the glowing skyline at night, while rural views appeal to me for their peaceful landscapes and natural colors.

Sugerencia: The answer is confusing and contains errors (‘I didn't’, ‘I don't have any proverbs’) and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and then give specific comparisons and examples. Correct grammar (use present tense) and complete your thoughts. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like ‘however’ or ‘for example’.

Ejemplo: I don't prefer one over the other because every country has unique scenery. For example, my country has many mountains and dramatic hiking routes, whereas other countries I visit often have coastal views and historic cityscapes.

× Definitely I do, I love to take a picture when I travel, especially for umm sightseeing and scenery like for example sunset or just over uh.

✓ Definitely I do; I love taking pictures when I travel, especially sightseeing and scenery, for example sunsets or similar views.

The phrase 'love to take a picture' is acceptable but 'love taking pictures' is more natural when speaking generally. 'Sightseeing' should be used without 'for' before it and pairs with '-ing' form. 'Sunset' should be plural ('sunsets') when speaking generally. Use commas and connectors to improve sentence flow. Suggested improvement: Use gerunds (taking, sightseeing) for habitual actions and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× Actually I don't have strong preference because I think both of those are beautiful in different ways.

✓ Actually I don't have a strong preference because I think both are beautiful in different ways.

Missing article 'a' before 'strong preference' is an article error (but here fixed as sentence structure). Also 'both of those' is wordy; 'both' suffices. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and keep pronouns concise: 'a strong preference' and 'both are'.

× For example, for city view I enjoy a night of skyline of the city and for.

✓ For example, for city views I enjoy a night skyline of the city.

Original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'City view' should be pluralized to 'city views' when speaking generally. 'I enjoy a night skyline' is a clearer phrasing; remove the trailing 'and for' which makes it incomplete. Suggestion: complete ideas and avoid dangling conjunctions.

× Well, actually I didn't. I don't have any proverbs about that.

✓ Well, actually I don't. I don't have any preferences about that.

'I didn't' is incorrect because the context asks preference generally; present tense 'I don't' is appropriate. Also 'proverbs' is the wrong word; likely 'preferences'. Suggestion: use present tense for current habits/opinions and choose the correct noun ('preferences').

× I think every country has their own own views and beautiful place.

✓ I think every country has its own views and beautiful places.

Use singular 'every country' with singular pronoun 'its' (not 'their'). Also duplicate 'own' should be one, and 'beautiful place' should be plural 'beautiful places' when speaking generally. Suggestion: match pronoun number to antecedent and avoid duplication.

× For example in my country we have a lot of mountain and other country that have.

✓ For example, in my country we have a lot of mountains, and other countries do too.

'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'Other country that have' is incomplete and ungrammatical; correct to 'other countries do too' to complete the idea. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and finish comparative clauses with auxiliary verbs ('do too').