Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: (1) Ngữ pháp: sửa động từ và cấu trúc (ví dụ: "enjoy taking" thay vì "enjoy to taking"); (2) Từ vựng và chọn từ chính xác: thay "climb" bằng từ phù hợp như "calming" hoặc "soothing"; (3) Tránh tiếng ồn (um, uh) và lặp từ không cần thiết; (4) Cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể. Cụ thể, hãy nói 2-3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of the sea and mountains because they help me reconnect with nature. The vast sea and the rugged mountain landscapes calm me and make me feel relaxed. I especially like capturing wide views during sunrise to show the colours and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: (1) Ngữ pháp: dùng thì và cấu trúc đúng (ví dụ "I prefer rural areas" thay vì "I will keen on"); (2) Từ vựng chính xác: thay "climb" bằng "calm" hoặc "refreshed"; (3) Rút gọn lời nói, tránh tiếng ỳ, dùng liên từ để nối lý do (e.g., "because", "so"); (4) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để minh hoạ (ví dụ: khung cảnh đồng lúa, tiếng chim).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have wide open landscapes and fresh air that make me feel calm and refreshed. For example, walking through rice fields and hearing birds in the morning is much more peaceful than the busy city.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: (1) Ngữ pháp: sửa cấu trúc thì và quá khứ hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ "I lived in Japan for five years"); (2) Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn và trực tiếp: mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu lý do và một chi tiết cụ thể; (3) Loại bỏ từ thừa và tiếng ngập ngừng; (4) Dùng từ vựng mô tả hơn (ví dụ: "Mount Fuji's snowy peak" hoặc "spectacular views").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because I lived there for five years and fell in love with Mount Fuji. Its snowy peak and the surrounding lakes create spectacular scenery that I never tire of photographing.

× Yes, I think I enjoy to taking pictures when, uh, sea and the mountain because, uh, I'm want to feel back to the nature and the landscape of the mountain and the sea is very, uh, climb for, for me.

✓ Yes, I think I enjoy taking pictures of the sea and the mountains because I want to feel close to nature and the landscapes of the mountains and the sea are very calming for me.

The phrase 'enjoy to taking' is incorrect: 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing) not an infinitive with to. Use 'taking' not 'to taking'. 'Sea and the mountain' needs articles and plural: 'the sea and the mountains'. 'I'm want' incorrectly uses 'am' with base verb; correct is 'I want'. 'feel back to the nature' is unnatural; use 'feel close to nature'. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match multiple places. 'Climb' is wrong word choice; context needs 'calming'. Suggestions: after verbs like enjoy, avoid 'to' and use -ing; ensure subject+verb agreement and choose appropriate nouns/adjectives for meaning.

× From my perspective, I will keen on the rural area because they are open landscape uh and fresh air makes me feel umm climb for.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the rural areas because they have open landscapes and the fresh air makes me feel calmer.

'Will keen on' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'be keen on' or simply 'prefer'. 'Rural area' should be plural or with an article: 'the rural areas'. 'They are open landscape' has number and word form errors: use 'they have open landscapes' or 'there are open landscapes'. 'Fresh air makes me feel ... climb for' uses wrong adjective; likely 'calmer'. Suggest using 'prefer' for preferences, match singular/plural forms, and use appropriate adjectives like calm/calmer.

× Also I think umm the uh landscape is more peaceful for me.

✓ Also, I think the landscape is more peaceful for me.

This sentence has filler words but the main issue is punctuation and word choice: 'more peaceful for me' is acceptable but 'landscape' may need plural 'landscapes' if referring generally. Remove filler 'umm the uh' for clarity. Suggest ensuring adjectives correctly modify nouns and remove disfluencies in spoken answers.

× I prefer views in another country, uh, especially in Japan because I was live in Japan for five years and I really love the Fuji mountains, which is the, one of the best landscape, uh, in Japan that I was, uh, travel to.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because I lived in Japan for five years and I really love Mount Fuji, which is one of the best landscapes I have visited in Japan.

'I was live in Japan' mixes past continuous structure incorrectly; correct simple past is 'I lived'. 'I really love the Fuji mountains' is awkward: 'Mount Fuji' or 'the Fuji area' is better. 'which is the, one of the best landscape' has article and number errors: use 'one of the best landscapes'. 'that I was, uh, travel to' uses wrong tense and structure; use present perfect 'I have visited' or simple past 'I visited'. Suggestions: use simple past to describe past residence, use 'have visited' when relating past experience to present, and ensure noun number and article agreement.