Views— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yeah, definitely. And, uh, I'm especially interested in taking pictures of the tables with the setup at the restaurant. And whenever I have a chance to visit the new restaurant, uh, I will have a photo of, umm, of a table of a food, uh, of that restaurant, uh, to have kind of a memory for myself.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
Actually, I prefer both because, umm, it depends on the situation. Sometimes even in the urban areas, you can find some aesthetic places, uh, where you can, where you want to make a picture, uh, and, uh, rural areas and, uh, so my preference in that case, I, I will definitely take more pictures of the urban areas.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
Even though I love, uh, views in my country, I personally prefer making photographs of, of the views of other countries because, umm, every place has its own specific spot has its own, uh, specific place where you cannot find any other similarities in the, in your country. So I'm, I'm more interested in taking pictures of the views in other countries.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and repetitive phrases.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing restaurant table settings because the presentation and lighting are often unique. For example, when I visit a new restaurant I take a photo of the food and table arrangement to remember the experience.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer first and then support it with a clear reason using linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetitions. Be specific about what appeals to you in urban views.
Ejemplo: I prefer urban areas overall because they offer varied architecture and interesting street scenes. For instance, city buildings, cafes, and colorful murals often make more compelling photos than typical rural landscapes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer followed by a specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Clarify what makes foreign views special to you (culture, architecture, colors).
Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they offer unique cultural scenes and architectures I can't find at home. For example, I love capturing colorful markets and historic streets abroad because they show different traditions and textures.
Gramática
× And whenever I have a chance to visit the new restaurant, uh, I will have a photo of, umm, of a table of a food, uh, of that restaurant, uh, to have kind of a memory for myself.
✓ And whenever I have a chance to visit a new restaurant, I will take a photo of a table of food there to keep as a memory for myself.
Student used 'have a photo of' which is unnatural here; the correct verb for creating a photograph is 'take (a photo)'. Also removed redundant fillers and adjusted word order: 'table of food' and 'there' are clearer than repeating 'of that restaurant'. Use of simple future 'will take' fits the meaning. Grammar Problem Type ID:10
× I'm especially interested in taking pictures of the tables with the setup at the restaurant.
✓ I'm especially interested in taking pictures of tables set up at restaurants.
Original uses 'the tables' and 'the restaurant' which implies specific, previously mentioned items. The speaker means tables and restaurants in general, so use plural without 'the' and plural 'restaurants'. Also 'with the setup' is awkward; 'set up' as participial adjective is clearer. Grammar Problem Type ID:17
× Sometimes even in the urban areas, you can find some aesthetic places, uh, where you can, where you want to make a picture, uh, and, uh, rural areas and, uh, so my preference in that case, I, I will definitely take more pictures of the urban areas.
✓ Sometimes even in urban areas you can find aesthetic places where you want to take pictures, so in that case I will definitely take more pictures of urban areas.
Removed unnecessary 'the' before 'urban areas' (article issue) and fixed verb choice 'make a picture' to the correct collocation 'take pictures'. Also simplified sentence structure and ensured subject-verb agreement with 'I will definitely take'. Original had repetition and filler words. Grammar Problem Type ID:2
× Even though I love, uh, views in my country, I personally prefer making photographs of, of the views of other countries because, umm, every place has its own specific spot has its own, uh, specific place where you cannot find any other similarities in the, in your country.
✓ Even though I love the views in my country, I prefer photographing views in other countries because every place has unique spots you won't find in your country.
Original has redundant and confusing phrasing ('has its own specific spot has its own specific place') and awkward pronoun use 'your country' when referring back to 'my country'. Corrected to consistent first person 'my country' and simplified 'unique spots you won't find in my country'. Also replaced 'making photographs of the views of other countries' with concise 'photographing views in other countries'. Grammar Problem Type ID:12}]} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12} PMID:10} PMID:17} PMID:2} PMID:12}
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