Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammatical errors, avoid redundancy, and add a brief specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I visit tourist sites I often can’t access certain vantage points, so I take photos from permitted spots to capture what’s happening on the other side. This helps me remember the scene and share it with friends.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words and repetition, and finish your thought with specific supporting details and linking words (e.g., because, for example).

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but I prefer urban areas because the architecture and skyline create interesting shapes and contrasts. For example, modern glass buildings next to historic facades often make striking photographs.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatical response with one or two specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases and complete your sentence; use linking words like because and for example.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I’ve already seen many local scenes, and foreign cities often offer different architectural styles and amenities. For instance, when I visited Barcelona I was impressed by Gaudí’s unique buildings, which I hadn’t seen at home.

× So taking pictures of me to see what's going on on the other side.

✓ So I take pictures to see what's going on on the other side.

The student used 'taking pictures of me' which incorrectly suggests the student is the subject of the photo. The correct meaning is that the student takes photos, so a subject and verb are required: 'I take pictures'. Replace 'taking pictures of me' with 'I take pictures' to clarify who is doing the action and to form a complete clause.

× And I really do like both of yous like the urban and the rural areas.

✓ I really like both the urban and the rural areas.

The phrase 'both of yous' is an incorrect pronoun usage. 'Both' should modify the two noun phrases directly: 'both the urban and the rural areas'. Remove 'yous' and extra 'like' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× But the one that stands out for me is the is the urban areas.

✓ But the one that stands out for me is the urban area.

The sentence contains repetition ('is the is the') and a number agreement issue: 'one' (singular) should match a singular noun 'urban area'. Remove the duplicate words and change 'areas' to 'area' to match 'one'.

× Unlike the buildings, the the the way they architect helps out with the.

✓ Unlike in buildings, the way they are designed helps create interesting views.

This fragment has repetition, an incorrect verb form ('architect' used as a verb incorrectly), and an incomplete ending. Use a passive construction 'are designed' or 'they design' and finish the idea: 'helps create interesting views'. This fixes word form and completes the sentence.

× my country have seen most of the views

✓ my country has seen most of the views

Subject-verb agreement: 'my country' is singular and requires 'has' rather than 'have'. Use 'has' to match the singular subject.

× and as I compared to the other countries, I feel like the other countries have beautiful amenities and the way they architecture and made their buildings.

✓ and compared to other countries, I feel that they have beautiful amenities and that the way they design and construct their buildings is attractive.

Several issues: 'as I compared to' is incorrect—use 'compared to'. Repeating 'the other countries' is wordy; use 'other countries' or 'they'. 'the way they architecture and made their buildings' uses 'architecture' as a verb and mixes tenses. Use 'the way they design and construct their buildings' and keep consistent present-tense description.

× I really do the.

✓ I really do.

This fragment 'I really do the.' is incomplete and ends with a stray determiner 'the'. Removing 'the' completes the sentence. If the speaker intended to emphasize agreement, 'I really do' suffices.