Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and colloquial contractions (e.g. '’cause'). Correct small errors (e.g. 'aft' -> 'often').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography lets me keep memories of places I may not visit again. For example, I often photograph mountains and beaches in my country, capturing sunrise or wide landscape shots to remember their colors and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference (or clearly state equal preference) in a concise topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'modern buildings' repeated) and informal phrases like 'makes me feel like wow.'

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views equally because each offers something different. For instance, urban areas impress me with striking architecture and city lights at night, while rural areas appeal to me with peaceful landscapes and wide-open fields.

Sugerencia: Be grammatical and specific: correct subject-verb agreement ('each country has') and avoid vague fillers like 'like' and incomplete sentences. Give one clear reason for domestic views and one specific example for foreign views, linked with transition words.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each place offers unique scenery. At home, I appreciate familiar sights like dramatic mountain ranges and colorful sunsets, whereas abroad I love places such as Switzerland for its pristine alpine scenery and crystal-clear lakes.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views 'cause I can't save them so I can at least capture them with my camera.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I can't keep them, so I can at least capture them with my camera.

'cause' is informal spoken contraction; replace with 'because' for clarity in writing. 'Save them' is awkward for views; 'keep' or 'preserve' is more appropriate. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' to join the clauses correctly. Suggestion: use full words in formal contexts and choose verbs that match meaning ('keep' for maintaining possession).

× There are many breathtaking views in my country, like mountains, beaches.

✓ There are many breathtaking views in my country, such as mountains and beaches.

Using 'like' for examples is informal and can imply similarity rather than examples; 'such as' is better for listing examples. Also connect items with 'and' rather than a trailing comma. Suggestion: use 'such as' for examples and complete the list grammatically.

× I can never get over them and I can't go there aft often.

✓ I can never get over them, and I can't go there very often.

'aft' is a typo for 'often' and 'go there often' requires 'very often' to convey frequency; include a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: proofread for typos and ensure correct adverb placement ('very often').

× So I'll just take pictures of them and save as memories.

✓ So I'll just take pictures of them and save them as memories.

The verb phrase 'save as memories' is missing the object 'them'. Pronoun 'them' must be included after 'save' to indicate what is being saved. Suggestion: include the direct object 'them' when using 'save' in this context.

× To be honest, I'm fine with both open areas and rural areas and I find both of them fascinating in their own way.

✓ To be honest, I'm fine with both urban and rural areas, and I find each fascinating in its own way.

Repeating 'areas' is redundant; use 'urban' and 'rural' to contrast. 'Both of them fascinating in their own way' is wordy; 'each fascinating in its own way' is more concise and grammatically natural. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use concise parallel structure.

× There are numerous buildings and many modern buildings, modern areas, urban areas, which makes me feel like wow.

✓ There are numerous modern buildings and urban areas, which make me feel amazed.

The original repeats synonyms and has subject-verb agreement issue: 'which makes' refers to plural subject 'buildings and areas' so should be 'make'. Also 'feel like wow' is informal and awkward; use 'feel amazed' or 'make me say wow' if keeping informal tone. Suggestion: avoid repetition, ensure verb agrees with compound subject, and use appropriate register.

× And there are also great landscapes in rural areas.

✓ There are also great landscapes in rural areas.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is acceptable in speech but unnecessary in writing; remove it for clarity. The sentence itself is grammatical; adjustment is stylistic. Suggestion: omit leading conjunctions in formal writing.

× I will say both because each country have its individual specialty as I love views in my country because they are very beautiful, mountains, sunsets, views and there are many more things to look at which fascinate me.

✓ I would say both because each country has its own specialties. I love views in my country because they are very beautiful — mountains, sunsets and other sights — and there are many things to look at that fascinate me.

Use 'would say' or 'I would say' for preference statements rather than simple future 'I will say'. 'Each country have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'has'. 'Individual specialty' is awkward; 'own specialties' is more natural. Also the original is a run-on; split into clearer sentences and use correct relative clauses ('that fascinate me'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and break long sentences into shorter, clearer ones.

× And in other countries like Switzerland, I love going there.

✓ In other countries, such as Switzerland, I would love to visit.

'I love going there' is vague and tense-inappropriate for hypothetical or general preference; 'I would love to visit' expresses preference for travel. Also remove leading 'And' and use 'such as' for examples. Suggestion: choose verb tense that matches the context and use clearer verbs like 'visit'.

× They have like very nice.

✓ They are very nice.

The sentence is incomplete and informal: 'They have like very nice' lacks an object after 'have' and uses filler 'like'. If referring to scenery, say 'They have very nice scenery' or simply 'They are very nice.' Suggestion: avoid filler words like 'like' and ensure sentences have necessary components (subject, verb, object if needed).