Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise, use correct grammar and varied vocabulary, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Correct verb tense and word choice (e.g., 'vegetation', 'I enjoy' not 'I enjoyed').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural landscapes. For example, I like capturing mountains and lush vegetation because their colors and textures look great in photos; I often share my best shots on social media.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct preference followed by concise, specific reasons. Use linking words for contrast and avoid awkward phrasing ('amazing series of the river', 'beautiful buildings high'). Use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'prefer', 'attracted to', 'modern architecture'). Keep to two to three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I'm drawn to mountains and rivers; their peaceful atmosphere makes great photos. However, I also appreciate urban scenes for their striking modern architecture and tall buildings, which offer interesting shapes and lines.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and briefly, then give specific reasons and an example. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I'll definitely pick'. Use linking words to connect idea (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature unique architecture and monuments I don't have at home. For example, I find the futuristic buildings shown in films fascinating and would love to photograph similar landmarks abroad.

× I enjoyed taking pictures of them because I can post them on my social media sometimes.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of them because I can post them on my social media sometimes.

The student mixed past tense 'enjoyed' with present ability 'can post' and general habit. Use present simple 'enjoy' for habitual actions. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent for habits (use 'I enjoy').

× I actually like taking pictures of many landscapes, like the city's landscape and the rural places.

✓ I actually like taking pictures of many landscapes, like city landscapes and rural places.

'The city's landscape' is awkward and singular while context refers to types of landscapes generally. Use plural 'city landscapes' and omit unnecessary definite article. Suggestion: use plural forms when speaking generally about types.

× Like when I see mountains, hills or beautiful vegetations and plants, I enjoyed taking pictures of them because I can post them on my social media sometimes.

✓ Like when I see mountains, hills, or beautiful vegetation and plants, I enjoy taking pictures of them because I can post them on my social media sometimes.

Two issues: 'vegetations' is incorrect plural—'vegetation' is an uncountable noun. Also 'enjoyed' should be present 'enjoy' for habitual action. Use present tense and correct noun form. Suggestion: use 'vegetation' without plural and keep present tense for habits.

× I will definitely pick the rural areas because I love the view of the mountains.

✓ I'll definitely pick rural areas because I love the view of the mountains.

Minor article usage: 'the rural areas' is acceptable but more natural to omit 'the' when speaking generally. Also contraction consistency: 'I'll' matches spoken style. Suggestion: drop 'the' when referring generally to categories.

× I love the amazing series of the river.

✓ I love the amazing series of rivers.

'Series of the river' is unclear and ungrammatical. If referring to multiple rivers or a river's course, say 'series of rivers' or 'the course of the river.' Suggestion: clarify meaning; use plural if speaking generally or 'the course of the river' for a single river's sequence.

× I also kind of like the urban areas because of the urban, the modern structures that are there, the beautiful buildings high.

✓ I also kind of like urban areas because of the modern structures there, such as tall, beautiful buildings.

Sentence is repetitive ('urban, the modern'), has misplaced adjective 'high' after 'buildings,' and awkward commas. Reorder to 'tall, beautiful buildings' and remove repetition. Suggestion: place adjectives before nouns and avoid redundant words.

× I'll definitely pick other countries because they have modern structures that are not really available here.

✓ I'll definitely pick other countries because they have modern structures that are not really available here.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is acceptable. Provided here to indicate present tense is appropriate for future preference followed by present simple stating general fact. No correction required.

× I usually see them in movies.

✓ I usually see them in movies.

Sentence is correct; 'usually see' is present simple for habitual action. No correction needed.

× I've seen unusual buildings and monuments that I feel like are breathtaking which are not available in my country, so I'll definitely pick.

✓ I've seen unusual buildings and monuments that I feel are breathtaking and are not available in my country, so I'll definitely choose other countries.

Minor issues: 'I feel like are breathtaking' is informal and redundant; 'I feel are breathtaking' is clearer. Also ending with 'I'll definitely pick' is incomplete—pick what? Make it 'choose other countries' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary 'like' and make the object explicit.