Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and remove redundant phrases. Add one specific detail about a recent photo and use a linking word to explain why you share them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos with my camera and iPhone because I love capturing animals and landscapes. For example, last week I photographed a heron by the river, and I shared the picture with my friends because they enjoy nature photography too.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and fluent: use present tense, a clear topic sentence, and link reasons with conjunctions. Give one specific image or activity that helps you relax.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have a peaceful atmosphere and slow daily life. For instance, walking through rice fields and watching farmers work helps me relax and appreciate the scenery.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrasing. State your preference directly, use linking words to explain reasons, and give a specific feature you admire in other countries. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe, because I love the combination of historic brick buildings and nearby green spaces. For example, strolling through cobbled streets with parks nearby creates a beautiful contrast I enjoy.

× Yes, absolutely, I like to taking photos of with my camera and iPhone because I enjoyed capturing animals and scenery by camera which I bought new and I share them with my friends because it.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I like taking photos with my camera and iPhone because I enjoy capturing animals and scenery with the camera I bought recently, and I share them with my friends.

The verb pattern 'like to taking' is incorrect; after 'like' use the base form with -ing (gerund) or 'to' + base verb, not both. Change 'to taking' to 'taking'. 'i' must be capitalized to 'I'. 'I enjoyed' is past tense but the context is habitual -> use present tense 'I enjoy'. 'by camera which I bought new' is awkward; use 'with the camera I bought recently'. Also remove redundant 'of' after 'photos' and correct punctuation. Suggestion: Use consistent present simple for habits and correct gerund forms (like + -ing).

× I like to taking photos of with my camera and iPhone because I enjoyed capturing animals and scenery by camera which I bought new and I share them with my friends because it.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I like taking photos with my camera and iPhone because I enjoy capturing animals and scenery with the camera I bought recently, and I share them with my friends.

The preposition 'of' after 'photos' is unnecessary; use 'take photos of' when specifying object (photos of animals) or 'take photos with' to indicate the device. 'by camera' is incorrect; use 'with the camera'. Use 'recently' rather than 'new' in this structure. Suggestion: Use 'with' to indicate the tool and 'of' only when specifying the subject of the photo.

× I like to taking photos of with my camera and iPhone because I enjoyed capturing animals and scenery by camera which I bought new and I share them with my friends because it.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I like taking photos with my camera and iPhone because I enjoy capturing animals and scenery with the camera I bought recently, and I share them with my friends.

The clause 'I enjoyed capturing' uses past tense but describes a habitual action, so present simple 'I enjoy capturing' is correct. Maintain consistent present tense for habits and preferences. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines and preferences.

× I like to taking photos of with my camera and iPhone because I enjoyed capturing animals and scenery by camera which I bought new and I share them with my friends because it.

✓ Yes, absolutely, I like taking photos with my camera and iPhone because I enjoy capturing animals and scenery with the camera I bought recently, and I share them with my friends.

The phrase 'scenery by camera which I bought new' mixes singular/plural and is awkward. 'Scenery' is uncountable and 'camera' should be 'the camera' (singular definite). Use 'the camera I bought recently' and keep 'scenery' uncountable. Suggestion: Use definite article with a specific singular noun and don't pluralize uncountable nouns.

× I prefer rural areas because I could feel the unique atmosphere and observing the people's life every day and at the same let me relax.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I can feel the unique atmosphere and observe people's daily lives, and at the same time it lets me relax.

'Could feel' suggests past ability; for a general preference use modal 'can' (or present simple 'feel'). 'Observing' should match the verb pattern 'can feel ... and observe' (parallel structure). 'the people's life' is incorrect: use 'people's daily lives' (plural) for generality. 'at the same' is incomplete; use 'at the same time'. 'let me relax' needs third-person singular agreement with 'it' -> 'it lets me relax'. Suggestion: Use parallel verb forms and correct subject-verb agreement for 'it lets'.

× I prefer rural areas because I could feel the unique atmosphere and observing the people's life every day and at the same let me relax.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I can feel the unique atmosphere and observe people's daily lives, and at the same time it lets me relax.

After 'because' you should use parallel verb forms: 'can feel' and 'observe' rather than mixing 'could feel' and 'observing'. Use base or modal + base to keep verbs consistent. Suggestion: Keep verbs parallel and use correct -ing forms only when needed.

× I prefer rural areas because I could feel the unique atmosphere and observing the people's life every day and at the same let me relax.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I can feel the unique atmosphere and observe people's daily lives, and at the same time it lets me relax.

'the people's life' is incorrect pronoun/determiner usage; omit 'the' and use plural 'people's lives' for general statements. 'it' is needed as a dummy subject for 'lets me relax'. Suggestion: Use possessive 'people's' without 'the' and pluralize 'lives' for generality.

× Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer different countries view be I prefer especially European countries view because I like the bricks, buildings and the nature combined with the city. So I like there.

✓ Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer views of different countries; especially I prefer views in European countries because I like the brick buildings and nature combined with the city. So I like being there.

The original mixes forms and incorrect word order. Use 'prefer views of' or 'prefer views in'. 'be I prefer especially' is ungrammatical; rephrase. 'European countries view' should be 'views in European countries' or 'European views'. 'the bricks, buildings' -> 'brick buildings' (compound adjective). 'the nature combined with the city' -> 'nature combined with the city' or 'nature and the city combined'. 'So I like there' is incorrect; use 'I like being there'. Suggestion: Use correct noun phrases, adjective order, and appropriate verbs like 'being' for location preference.

× Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer different countries view be I prefer especially European countries view because I like the bricks, buildings and the nature combined with the city. So I like there.

✓ Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer views of different countries; especially I prefer views in European countries because I like brick buildings and nature combined with the city. So I like being there.

'the bricks, buildings' is awkward; 'brick buildings' is the correct adjective-noun order. 'especially' should be placed before the clause it modifies. Suggestion: Place adjectives before nouns and use compound adjectives correctly.

× Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer different countries view be I prefer especially European countries view because I like the bricks, buildings and the nature combined with the city. So I like there.

✓ Oh, it is very difficult, but I prefer views of different countries; especially I prefer views in European countries because I like brick buildings and nature combined with the city. So I like being there.

The sentence contains several structural errors: 'view be I prefer especially' is ungrammatical, and word order is confused. Break into clearer clauses: state difficulty, then preference, then reason. Use semicolons or separate sentences to improve clarity. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and use clear connectors like 'because' and 'especially' correctly.