Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and fewer repetitions, and connect ideas with linking words. Be specific about what kinds of views you like and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of wide landscapes because they capture unique moments. For example, when I visit a mountain or seaside, the light and colors change quickly, and taking pictures helps me preserve those memories. Therefore, I often take several photos to remember the scene.

Sugerencia: Clarify vocabulary and correct tense/use of words. Begin with a direct preference sentence, give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., because, so), and avoid vague phrases like "airpan" or "like" repeatedly.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer varied natural scenery and a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, when I escape the city, I find interesting fields, rivers and traditional houses, so I can relax and take more creative shots.

Sugerencia: Use clearer grammar and organize ideas: state your overall preference, then give one or two concrete reasons with linking words. Avoid unfinished fragments and repetition.

Ejemplo: Although I enjoy traveling abroad and seeing different landscapes, I prefer the views in my own country because they are familiar and emotionally meaningful to me. For example, local festivals and countryside scenes remind me of family traditions and childhood memories.

× Yes, I do like take pictures of big different views because life were full of experience and surprises.

✓ Yes, I do like to take pictures of different wide views because life is full of experience and surprises.

Errors: missing to-infinitive after 'like' (Verb + -ing form / infinitive), incorrect adjective order and word choice ('big different' -> 'different wide' or 'wide different' but 'different wide views' or better 'different kinds of wide views'), and subject-verb agreement with 'life were' (Singular and plural issue). Correction reasons: use 'like to take' or 'like taking'; use appropriate adjective order and phrasing such as 'different wide views' or 'different kinds of wide views'; 'life' is singular so use 'is' not 'were'. Suggestion: say 'I like to take pictures of different kinds of wide views because life is full of experiences and surprises.'

× But when you experience perfect things or beautiful things, your mind can't.

✓ But when you experience perfect or beautiful things, your mind can't remember them all.

Errors: incomplete verb phrase 'your mind can't' (Sentence without a verb) and awkward duplication 'perfect things or beautiful things' (wordiness). Correction reasons: 'can't' must be followed by a verb, e.g., 'can't remember them all.' Suggestion: simplify to 'perfect or beautiful things' and complete the idea with an appropriate verb.

× Your brain can barely remember all of this.

✓ Your brain can barely remember all of it.

Error: awkward pronoun and determiner 'all of this' when referring to multiple memories; better 'all of it.' Correction reasons: choose pronoun that matches referent; 'it' refers to the collection of memories. Suggestion: use 'all of it' or 'all of them' depending on context.

× So when we take pictures we like keeping memories.

✓ So when we take pictures we like to keep memories.

Error: gerund 'keeping' is acceptable but after 'like' use either 'to + verb' or gerund consistently; 'keep memories' is awkward—better 'preserve memories' or 'keep memories alive.' Correction reasons: prefer 'like to keep' or 'like keeping' but use natural collocation: 'preserve memories.' Suggestion: 'we like to keep memories' or 'we like preserving memories.'

× I prefer taking pictures in rural areas since I usually live in airpan areas and lots of views were like my daily routine.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas since I usually live in urban areas and many views are part of my daily routine.

Errors: 'airpan' is misspelling of 'urban' (vocabulary), incorrect tense 'were' for present general truth (Present tense issue), and awkward quantifier 'lots of views were like my daily routine.' Correction reasons: 'live in urban areas' and use present simple 'are' for habitual facts; replace 'lots of' with 'many' and rephrase 'are part of my daily routine.' Suggestion: use 'I usually live in urban areas, and many views are part of my daily routine.'

× So when I went to rural areas it usually means I went for like experience, rest.

✓ So when I go to rural areas it usually means I go for experiences and rest.

Errors: inconsistent tense—past 'went' mixed with 'usually' (Past tense issue and Present tense issue) and awkward filler 'for like experience.' Correction reasons: use present simple for habitual actions: 'when I go... it usually means I go for experiences and rest.' Replace 'experience' with plural 'experiences' or 'a break' for rest. Suggestion: 'I go for new experiences and to rest.'

× I do like go abroad and experience some other views but at the end of the day I think I prefer the views in my own country since let's those are my homeland and the views were my daily and my life.

✓ I do like to go abroad and see different views, but at the end of the day I think I prefer the views in my own country since it is my homeland and those views are part of my daily life.

Errors: missing to-infinitive after 'like' (Verb + -ing form), awkward 'experience some other views' -> 'see different views', incorrect contraction/phrase 'let's those' (Sentence structure/pronoun error), subject-verb agreement 'views were' should be present 'views are', and awkward 'my daily and my life.' Correction reasons: use 'like to go', 'see different views', 'it is my homeland' or 'since those are my homeland' corrected to singular 'it', and present simple for habitual facts. Suggestion: 'I like to go abroad and see different views, but I prefer the views in my own country because it is my homeland and those views are part of my daily life.'

× My lots of experience were.

✓ I have had many experiences.

Errors: sentence fragment and incorrect quantifier/structure 'My lots of experience were' (Sentence structure and Quantifier errors). Correction reasons: use a proper subject and verb: 'I have had many experiences' or 'I have many experiences.' Suggestion: 'I have had many experiences.'