Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Include vocabulary related to photography and feelings (e.g., capture, scenery, relax, hobby).

Ejemplo: Yes — I love taking photographs; it’s my favorite hobby because it helps me relax and see details I might otherwise miss. For example, I enjoy photographing landscapes and candid shots of friends when we travel, as I like capturing natural expressions and beautiful scenery.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both but explain why using linking words (however, while, for example). Use specific vocabulary (skylines, architecture, wildlife, landscapes, street photography, nighttime lights). Reduce hesitations and filler words.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both, but if I had to choose I prefer rural scenes because I can photograph natural landscapes, plants, trees and wildlife more easily. However, I also like urban photography for its architecture and vibrant street scenes, especially at night when the city lights create striking contrasts.

Sugerencia: Be decisive or clearly explain a balanced view with connecting words (both, whereas, while, for instance). Use precise language about what you photograph at home versus abroad and avoid repetition. Mention specific examples or comparisons to add depth.

Ejemplo: Both have attractions for me. At home I focus on cityscapes and the way light changes buildings from day to night, whereas when I travel abroad I prefer photographing the countryside, capturing rural life and landscapes that are different from what I see at home.

× Yeah, definitely like taking pictures with my camera and is currently my favorite and interest the most interested hobbies in my life.

✓ Yeah, I definitely like taking pictures with my camera; it is currently my favorite and the most interesting hobby in my life.

The original sentence omits the subject 'I' before 'is' and incorrectly uses 'interested' instead of the adjective 'interesting' to describe a hobby. Insert the subject 'I' and use 'it is' for a clear clause. Use 'the most interesting hobby' (singular) to match 'favorite' and correct adjective form. Also use punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: Always include the subject for a new clause, use 'interesting' to describe something that causes interest, and keep noun forms singular when using 'hobby'. 'I definitely like...' follows present simple for habits.

× I like taking pictures no matter or taking pictures with my friends or taking pictures of the scenery that I think is beautiful.

✓ I like taking pictures no matter where I am, whether I am taking pictures with my friends or photographing scenery that I think is beautiful.

The phrase 'no matter or' is ungrammatical and the sentence lacks connectors. Use 'no matter where I am' and the correlative conjunction 'whether...or' to list alternatives. Use 'photographing' or 'taking pictures of' consistently and include a subject and verb in each clause for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'whether... or' for alternatives and 'no matter where' to indicate any location; keep verb forms parallel.

× It's just thing I think it's just like relaxing processing like.

✓ It's just something I find relaxing.

This fragment contains repetition and incorrect word choices ('thing', 'processing like'). Condense to a simple clause: 'It's just something I find relaxing.' Use 'find' to express personal perception and avoid redundant phrases. Suggestion: Keep short, clear statements for feelings: 'I find it relaxing' or 'It helps me relax'.

× I think there is both beautiful sites in urban area and the rural area.

✓ I think there are beautiful sites in both urban and rural areas.

Use 'there are' for plural 'sites' (subject-verb agreement) and place 'both' before the items it connects. Also use plural 'areas' and correct word order: 'in both urban and rural areas.' Suggestion: Match 'there is/there are' to the number of the noun and place 'both' before the coordinated nouns.

× Like when when I taking pictures of rural area I like taking pictures of the maybe the scenery, the plants, the trees and also maybe the animals I've seen.

✓ For example, when I take pictures in rural areas, I like photographing the scenery, the plants, the trees, and maybe the animals I see.

Omit the duplicated 'when' and use the base verb 'take' after 'when I' (present simple for habitual action). Use 'photographing' or 'take pictures in' for clarity, plural 'areas', and simple present 'I see' instead of present perfect 'I've seen' for habitual observation. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits ('I take', 'I like') and keep noun number consistent.

× Or in the urban area I like taking pictures of the cars and the day and lights.

✓ Or in urban areas I like taking pictures of cars, the daytime, and the lights.

Remove the unnecessary definite article before 'urban area' and use plural 'urban areas' to match general preference. 'the cars' is acceptable but 'cars' is more natural when speaking generally. 'the day and lights' is unclear; use 'daytime' and 'the lights' or 'city lights' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use articles carefully: omit 'the' for general plural nouns and use 'city lights' or 'the lights' to be specific.

× It's a very hard question 'cause I think there is many beautiful sights either in my country and the country oversight overseas and in my country I like capturing the pictures, like the city pictures like capturing the colors and the day and nights transformation.

✓ It's a very hard question because I think there are many beautiful sights both in my country and overseas. In my country I like capturing city scenes, the colors, and the transition from day to night.

Use 'there are' for plural 'sights' (subject-verb agreement). Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'. Use 'both... and' to connect two places. 'Overseas' already implies other countries; 'the country oversight overseas' is incorrect. 'Day and nights transformation' should be 'the transition from day to night.' Suggestion: Use 'there are' for plural nouns, 'both... and' for two elements, and clear phrases like 'transition from day to night'.

× And if I'm going to overseas, I like capturing the the countryside.

✓ And if I go overseas, I would like to capture the countryside.

Use correct preposition 'overseas' without 'to' and use conditional/future appropriate to the context: 'If I go overseas, I would like to capture the countryside.' The original uses 'I'm going to overseas' which is ungrammatical. Also remove duplicate 'the the'. Suggestion: Use 'if I go overseas' for a conditional situation and 'would like to' to express intention or desire for future events.