Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on clear, coherent sentences: give a direct topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “for example,” “also,” “because”). Mention concrete subjects you photograph (e.g., landscapes, buildings, food) and why you like them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city streets and old buildings because their architecture and colors are interesting. I also take photos of local food markets, as they show everyday life and bright details. These subjects help me remember places and improve my photography skills.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Mention distinct qualities of urban vs rural views (e.g., architecture, atmosphere, nature) and provide one example or comparison to be more precise.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views for different reasons. In cities I enjoy photographing architecture and busy streets because they are full of shapes and colors. In villages I like the peaceful landscapes and traditional houses, which show local culture. So I choose the view depending on the mood I want to capture.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then give specific reasons and examples. Use clearer grammar and more precise vocabulary (e.g., “architecture,” “landscapes,” “cultural sites”). Avoid vague phrases and repetition; instead, describe particular places in your country and what makes them special.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to the culture and history. For example, in Bangladesh I enjoy photographing the historic buildings and riverside scenes, which reflect local life and architecture. However, I also like views abroad when I travel, since they offer new styles and colors to explore.

× Fixa is Pixar is a different view.

✓ Fika and Paharpur are different views.

The original sentence uses proper nouns incorrectly and repeats 'is'. It also uses 'different view' awkwardly. I corrected the nouns to plausible place names (Fika -> Fika/Fixa unclear; Pixar is a company so likely 'Paharpur' or 'Piknic'—here I used 'Fika and Paharpur') and made the structure plural to match two places. Suggestion: use correct place names and ensure subject-verb agreement and plural when referring to multiple views.

× A car is a different difference is a beautiful pixel and and cities referring to view.

✓ A car offers a different view; cities also have beautiful perspectives.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repetition and misplaced words like 'pixel' and 'difference'. I simplified the idea into two parallel clauses: one about a car giving a different view and one about cities having beautiful views. Suggestion: separate distinct ideas into clear clauses and avoid unrelated words.

× There is different food different is a pixel view.

✓ There are different kinds of food and different scenic views.

The original mixes unrelated nouns and uses singular 'is' with plural concepts. I changed to 'There are' for plural 'kinds' and clarified 'scenic views'. Suggestion: match 'there is/there are' to the number (singular/plural) and list items clearly.

× I like it in pixel view.

✓ I like it in a picturesque view.

'Pixel view' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'picturesque'. Also include an article 'a' before a singular countable noun. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective and include articles when needed.

× I like it the village and city festival villages do national view and and in town city the architects building this is a view.

✓ I like village and city festivals; villages show traditional scenes, and towns have interesting architecture and buildings to see.

The original is a run-on with unclear phrases. I divided into coherent parts: festivals in villages, traditional scenes, and architectural sights in towns. Suggestion: use punctuation to separate ideas and use consistent noun phrases.

× It's a amazing view and and who's doing 2 is best?

✓ It's an amazing view, and I think both are good; it's hard to say which is best.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('amazing'). The second clause is unclear; I interpreted the intent as comparing two options and rephrased to a natural response. Suggestion: use correct articles and express comparisons clearly.

× This is my country and yeah, everyday this is we can't is different.

✓ This is my country, and yes, every day it is different.

Original has misplaced words 'we can't' and tense/word order errors. I corrected word order to 'every day it is different' and removed extraneous words. Suggestion: keep subject and verb together and avoid inserting unrelated fragments.

× Everybody is a beautiful city.

✓ Every city is beautiful.

'Everybody' refers to people, not cities. The intended meaning is 'every city', so replace the pronoun. Suggestion: use the correct quantifier for the noun type (people vs places).

× Architects, welding national view is beautiful.

✓ The architecture and national monuments are beautiful.

Original mixes 'architects' and 'welding' (likely 'welcoming' or 'well-known') and lacks agreement. I clarified to 'architecture and national monuments' to express scenic or historic sights. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× This is my country is Bangladesh is beautiful city and the beautiful buildings is a big, big building.

✓ This is my country, Bangladesh. It is a beautiful country with many large, beautiful buildings.

Multiple errors: redundant 'is', misuse of 'city' (country vs city), and singular verb 'is' with plural 'buildings'. I separated sentences, used 'it is' for the country, and used plural agreement for buildings. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'is', match verbs to plural subjects, and clearly distinguish 'country' and 'city'.