Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct comparative forms (sunrise is more beautiful than other views) and avoid repeating phrases like "different views."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes. For example, I particularly love capturing sunsets and sunrises because the colors and light change dramatically, creating unique moods. Because of that variety, I often get up early or stay out late to take photos.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first and then add two clear, specific reasons linked with connectors (because, so, therefore). Correct grammar (e.g., "rural areas" plural, "there isn't fresh air" → "the air isn't fresh"). Reduce hesitations like "uh" and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because the air is fresher and the scenery is more peaceful. For instance, there are fewer buildings and less traffic, so I can relax and enjoy nature. Therefore, I usually choose rural locations for walks and photography.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid fillers. Use clear reasons and specific examples rather than vague phrases like "etcetera." Correct grammar ("my own country"; "there are fewer people and fewer facilities"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (because, for example).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Bangladesh feels like home and its countryside is very beautiful. For example, the villages have wide green fields and clean air, which I find more relaxing than crowded foreign cities.

× Yes, I like taking pictures in different views because the sunset view is a different, uh, beautiful and uh, sunrising view is most beautiful than any other views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because the sunset is beautiful, and the sunrise is more beautiful than other views.

The original sentence misuses adjectives and comparative structures. 'Different, uh, beautiful' is redundant; use 'beautiful'. 'Sunrising' is not a correct noun; use 'sunrise'. 'Most beautiful than' is incorrect comparative form; use 'more beautiful than' for comparison. Also use 'of different views' instead of 'in different views'. Suggestion: Use 'sunrise' and 'sunset' as nouns, avoid redundancy, and form comparisons with 'more... than'.

× That's why I am taking pictures in different views.

✓ That's why I take pictures of different views.

The present continuous 'I am taking' suggests a temporary action; context indicates a habitual preference, so simple present 'I take' is appropriate. Also use 'of different views' rather than 'in different views' for collocation. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and correct preposition 'of'.

× Umm, basically I prefer rural area cause urban area has uh, more population, uh, more facilities and there are not fresh air.

✓ Umm, basically I prefer rural areas because urban areas have more people and more facilities, and there is not fresh air.

Use plural 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' for general statements. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'Has more population' is unnatural; use 'have more people' or 'a larger population'. 'There are not fresh air' is incorrect: 'air' is uncountable, so use 'there is not (any) fresh air' or 'there isn't fresh air'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for generalizations, 'because' for formal speech, and correct agreement with uncountable nouns.

× But that's why I don't like urban areas.

✓ Therefore, I don't like urban areas.

'But that's why' is redundant or awkward. Use 'therefore' or 'so' to indicate the reason already given. This is a style improvement rather than strict grammar, but it clarifies the connection. Suggestion: Use clearer connectors like 'so' or 'therefore'.

× I like rural areas and rural views cause here is fresh air.

✓ I like rural areas and rural views because there is fresh air there.

'Here is fresh air' is odd when speaking generally; place 'there' to refer to rural areas. Also use 'because' instead of 'cause'. Ensure correct word order: 'there is fresh air there'. Suggestion: Use 'there is' for existence and place the locative adverb correctly.

× I prefer own country views, uh, more than other countries because Bangladesh is my homeland, it's my motherland and the rural area of the countries, but or the parts is very beautiful 'cause there are less population, uh, less facilities, fresh air, etcetera, etcetera.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country more than those of other countries because Bangladesh is my homeland and its rural areas are very beautiful, as they have a smaller population, fewer facilities, and fresh air.

Several article and pronoun errors: use 'the views of my own country' or 'my country's views'; 'those of other countries' avoids repetition. 'The rural area of the countries' is unclear; use 'its rural areas'. 'Parts is' should be 'parts are'. Use 'a smaller population' or 'fewer people' and 'fewer facilities' (fewer with countable nouns). 'Less population' is incorrect because population is countable; use 'smaller population' or 'fewer people'. Also replace colloquial 'cause' with 'because'. Suggestion: Use correct articles ('the'), plural agreement, and 'fewer' for countable nouns; keep sentence concise.