Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetition, use correct verb forms, and make a concise, coherent reply with one topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Include linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. I especially enjoy capturing natural landscapes such as fields and mountains because they offer varied colors and moods, which make my photos more interesting.

Sugerencia: Avoid fillers and repeated words, combine sentences for clarity, and use linking words (e.g., because, although) to connect reasons. Be specific about what you find attractive in rural scenes.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they have more natural beauty, such as open fields and untouched landscapes, which offer unique textures and lighting. In contrast, urban areas are mostly man-made and often lack the natural elements I like to capture.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and avoid vague fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific reasons with examples. Replace vague phrases like “more objects” and “uh, test” with concrete details.

Ejemplo: I prefer taking pictures in Canada. For example, the Canadian landscape offers diverse scenery—forests, lakes and mountains—which gives me more varied subjects and dramatic lighting compared with the crowded urban scenes I often saw in India.

× I enjoy to capture nature as natural sceneries, landscapes, fields, mountains.

✓ I enjoy capturing nature, such as sceneries, landscapes, fields, and mountains.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), not an infinitive. Also improve word order and article use: use 'such as' to introduce examples and add commas for clarity.

× Actually I'm I'm I'm very fond of nature, so I love to capture the nature.

✓ Actually, I am very fond of nature, so I love capturing it.

Remove repeated fillers 'I'm' and use consistent gerund 'capturing' after 'love' when referring to an activity. Replace 'the nature' with the pronoun 'it' or simply 'nature' because 'nature' is uncountable and does not require 'the' here.

× I love to take photographs in rural areas because they're the the sceneries are more beautiful over there rather than the urban areas.

✓ I love to take photographs in rural areas because the sceneries there are more beautiful than in urban areas.

Remove repetition 'they're the the' and correct comparative structure: use 'more beautiful than' rather than 'rather than'. Place 'there' appropriately and simplify 'the urban areas' to 'urban areas' for generalization.

× Because in urban areas there are like you know, most of the the most of the places are man made.

✓ In urban areas, most places are man-made.

Avoid sentence fragments beginning with 'Because' unless connected; simplify and remove fillers 'like you know' and duplicate 'the the most of'. Use the adjective 'man-made' to describe places.

× So it is hard to find any place to capture.

✓ So it is hard to find a place to photograph.

Use 'photograph' (verb) or 'to capture' with object; 'capture' is often transitive and needs an object like 'images' or use 'photograph'. Also use 'a place' rather than 'any place' for natural phrasing here.

× I had been living in India for all my life before moving to Canada five years back.

✓ I lived in India all my life before moving to Canada five years ago.

Use simple past 'lived' for a state that continued until a past point. 'Had been living' suggests a past perfect continuous but is unnecessary here. Use 'five years ago' instead of 'five years back' for standard phrasing.

× And when I compare the both countries, I love to take pictures in Canada as there are like, you know, more natural sceneries, uh, more objects to capture and uh, test.

✓ When I compare the two countries, I prefer taking pictures in Canada because there are more natural scenes and more subjects to photograph.

Use 'the two countries' or simply 'the two' rather than 'the both'. Use 'prefer taking' for natural phrasing and gerund form after 'prefer'. Replace informal fillers 'like, you know, uh' and 'test' (unclear) with 'subjects to photograph'. 'Sceneries' is awkward; use 'scenes' or 'scenic views'.