Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid repeated fillers and pronunciation mistakes, and use linking language to add a brief reason or example. Also correct key vocabulary (use “pictures of views” or “scenery,” not “wheels”). Aim for 2–3 smooth sentences with one supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I arrive in a new place I often photograph the scenery because it helps me remember the atmosphere and the emotions I felt at that moment.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct vocabulary (use “views” not “wheels”), and use linking words for clarity. Give one specific reason and a short example. Reduce repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., “the environment is not polluted” or “there is little pollution”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is fresher and there is less pollution. For example, when I visit the countryside I feel healthier and more relaxed after spending time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer and explain briefly using correct vocabulary. Decide on one position (own country, other countries, or both) and support it with a specific reason and example. Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “although.”

Ejemplo: I like views in both my own country and other countries because each place offers familiar scenes and new perspectives. For instance, local landscapes feel comforting, while visiting abroad exposes me to different architecture and cultures, which I also enjoy photographing.

× I like taking picture of different wheels.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' (a habitual activity) and 'different' which modifies a plural noun. Also 'wheels' seems to be a misheard word; based on context 'views' fits the question. Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items or repeated actions. Suggestion: use 'pictures' for multiple photos and ensure the noun matches the intended meaning ('views').

× Umm, when I arrived, umm, uh, new place.

✓ When I arrived at a new place, ...

This fragment lacks a preposition and complete structure. 'Arrived' requires the preposition 'at' (or 'in' for larger places) and a determiner 'a' before 'new place'. To form a complete clause, include these elements: 'When I arrived at a new place, I felt...'. Suggestion: complete the sentence and add the appropriate preposition and article.

× I, I, I, I enjoy taking pictures because, uh, it, it helps me remember feelings and and emotion umm, so I, I feel it's.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures because they help me remember feelings and emotions, so I feel that way.

Pronoun usage is confusing: 'it' is singular but refers to 'pictures' (plural), so use 'they'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings'. The clause 'I feel it's' is incomplete; specify 'that way' or a full idea. Remove filler repetitions. Suggestion: use clear pronouns that agree in number with their antecedents and complete the final clause.

× I prefer wheels in rural areas because the air is fresh and the environment not pollution and I for example when for example I the the fresh air keeps me healthy.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the air is fresh and the environment is not polluted. For example, the fresh air keeps me healthy.

'wheels' should be 'views' to match the topic. 'Environment not pollution' is ungrammatical: use passive adjective 'not polluted' or 'not polluted by industry'. Also the sentence is run-on and repetitive; separate into two sentences. 'The fresh air keeps me healthy' is a clear independent clause; add punctuation and remove duplicated words. Suggestion: replace incorrect words, use correct adjective/past participle 'polluted', and break into clear sentences.

× I prefer a wheel in all countries because it's familiar.

✓ I prefer views in all countries because they feel familiar.

'a wheel' is singular and incorrect; use plural 'views'. 'It's familiar' uses singular pronoun for plural noun; change to 'they feel familiar' so pronoun agrees with 'views'. Suggestion: match number between nouns and pronouns and use plural forms when talking generally about multiple views.

× Is is it feels familiar for me.

✓ It feels familiar to me.

This fragment has repetition 'Is is it' and incorrect preposition 'for me'. Use 'It feels familiar to me' as the correct idiomatic expression. Remove duplicated words. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use common collocations like 'feel familiar to someone'.

× I and in my country have a lot of wheels. When.

✓ In my country I have a lot of views.

The word order 'I and in my country have' is incorrect. Place the prepositional phrase 'In my country' at the beginning or after the subject: 'In my country, there are many views' or 'In my country I have seen many views'. Also 'wheels' should be 'views.' The trailing 'When.' is an incomplete fragment and should be removed. Suggestion: reorder the sentence to subject-verb-object or use 'there are' for existence, and remove unfinished fragments.