Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking photos, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Reduce hesitations (uh) and avoid irrelevant details. Use linking words (for example, because, and) to connect ideas and keep answers within 2–4 sentences. Focus on concrete details such as what kinds of views you like and a short example of a recent place you photographed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like exploring new places in my area. For example, I recently visited Bharata and Nunthur and took photos of the mountain scenery and local streets. I also take pictures when I visit friends and family to capture memorable moments.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason. State your preference in one sentence, then give one or two specific, coherent reasons using linking words (because, however, for example). Avoid unclear or contradictory statements about pollution; if you mean cities have more features you like, say so and support it with concrete examples (architecture, cafés, transport).

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse architecture and lively street scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing modern buildings, busy markets and city parks, which provide many interesting subjects and colors.

Sugerencia: Give a clear stance and support it with specific comparisons. Start with ‘I prefer…’ or ‘I like both because…’. If comparing, mention concrete differences (landscapes, culture, cleanliness) and one brief reason. Keep sentences short and logical; avoid vague phrases and unrelated ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries for variety and cleaner environments. For instance, foreign cities I visited had well-maintained parks and historic sites that looked very different from the crowded areas at home, so I found them more interesting to photograph.

× Of course, uh, I like picture, uh, because, uh, I want to go to, uh, different new places in my area as, uh, as like Bharata, Nunthur and I was to visiting in my friends and also family in and I was so swim time will be, uh.

✓ Of course. I like taking pictures because I want to visit new places in my area such as Bharata and Nunthur, and to visit my friends and family. I also enjoy swimming in my free time.

This sentence contains multiple sentence structure errors (ID 26) and verb form problems. The student used 'like picture' instead of the gerund 'taking pictures', mixed tenses ('I was to visiting'), and ran several ideas together without proper connectors or punctuation. Suggestions: use gerunds after like (liking + -ing), use 'visit' for intent or habit, separate ideas with conjunctions or periods, and use correct noun phrases (friends and family) and expressions for free time ('in my free time' or 'during my free time').

× Yes uh, I prefer in urban area because, uh, if there are uh, different types of of pollution in our country as we like uh, bike, uh, electric bike will be not popular in our country and also electric car and uh uh, we can be pollution in our.

✓ Yes, I prefer urban areas because there are different types of pollution in our country. For example, electric bikes and electric cars are not popular here, which contributes to pollution.

Main issues are incorrect use of prepositions and articles (ID 11) and pluralization. 'Prefer in urban area' should be 'prefer urban areas' or 'prefer the urban area'. 'There are' is needed to introduce plural 'types of pollution'. Also 'be not popular' should be 'are not popular'. Suggestions: use 'prefer' with a noun phrase without 'in' when general (prefer urban areas), use 'there are' for existence, and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects ('are not popular').

× Of course, so I think of also in my country are very small than some countries will be be more pollution will be other concern in my country is very heavily goods and so all people will be attacked for helps one and it's other.

✓ Of course. I also think my country is smaller than some other countries, and there is more pollution elsewhere. Another concern is heavy traffic and overcrowding, which affects people who need help.

The original has subject-verb agreement and sentence structure errors (IDs 27 and 26). Phrases like 'in my country are very small' are incorrect; the subject 'my country' requires 'is'. 'More pollution will be other concern' is ungrammatical; use 'there is more pollution elsewhere' or 'another concern is more pollution'. 'Heavily goods' likely meant 'heavy traffic' or 'overcrowding'. Suggestions: ensure the verb agrees with the subject (singular 'my country' + 'is'), break ideas into clear sentences, and choose accurate nouns ('traffic' instead of 'goods') to convey meaning.