Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid repeating filler phrases, correct word choice (‘wheels’ → ‘views’, ‘a beautiful pictures’ → ‘beautiful pictures’), and limit to up to five sentences. Add one or two specific details (where, what camera features you like) linked smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do — photography is one of my hobbies. When I got a new phone with a high-quality camera, I began going to parks and city landmarks to capture different views. I especially enjoy shooting at golden hour because the light makes colors more vivid.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Replace incorrect words (‘wheels’ → ‘views’), fix subject-verb agreement, and provide a clear reason with one specific example. Use a linking word when contrasting.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they offer more variety in natural scenery. For example, country lanes, fields and forests provide different textures and colors throughout the year, which I find more inspiring than concrete streets.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid hesitation fillers. Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example rather than a vague superlative. Use one linking phrase to introduce the reason and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because they are very diverse and familiar to me. For instance, we have both dramatic mountains and scenic coastlines, so I often feel more comfortable photographing local landscapes than unfamiliar foreign places.

× To be honest, it's my hobby to take pictures of different wheels.

✓ To be honest, my hobby is taking pictures of different views.

The sentence uses an infinitive 'to take' which is acceptable, but the noun 'hobby' is more naturally followed by a gerund (verb + -ing). Also 'wheels' is incorrect contextually; the intended word is 'views'. Use 'taking' after 'hobby' and replace 'wheels' with 'views' for correct meaning. Suggestion: Use 'my hobby is taking pictures of...'.

× I remember when I had a new phone and I was astonished with it.

✓ I remember when I got a new phone and was amazed by it.

Use of 'had a new phone' is grammatically possible but 'got' better indicates receiving/purchasing which fits the memory. 'Was astonished with' is awkward; 'amazed by' is the correct collocation. Also omit the redundant second 'I' for style: 'and was amazed by it.' Suggestion: Use 'got' for past event and 'amazed by' for correct preposition.

× It's a new camera and I was going everywhere and just taking a beautiful pictures of fascinating places.

✓ It had a new camera, and I went everywhere, just taking beautiful pictures of fascinating places.

Multiple issues: 'It's a new camera' mixes present tense with the past narrative; change to past 'It had a new camera' or better 'My new phone had a new camera' to match context. 'I was going everywhere' should be simple past 'I went everywhere' for habitual past action. 'Taking a beautiful pictures' is incorrect: 'a' cannot be used with plural 'pictures'; use 'taking beautiful pictures' (no article) or 'a beautiful picture' (singular). Also avoid redundant 'just'. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistent and remove article before plural noun.

× To be honest, both of them has its own beautiful wheels and its own special aspects, but for me, rural areas are always much better because of the variety of the wheels.

✓ To be honest, both of them have their own beautiful views and their own special aspects, but for me rural areas are always much better because of the variety of views.

'Both of them' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have' not 'has'. 'Its' should be 'their' to match plural subject. 'Wheels' is contextually wrong; use 'views'. Also 'the variety of the wheels' is awkward—use 'the variety of views' without 'the' before 'variety' if speaking generally. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent plural pronouns; replace incorrect nouns.

× Uh, frankly speaking, uh, my country is uh, second to none for me, uh, because, uh, I reckon that it has the most beautiful views in the whole world.

✓ Frankly speaking, my country is second to none for me because I reckon it has the most beautiful views in the world.

Excess filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity. 'The whole world' is acceptable but 'the world' is more natural. 'I reckon that it has' can be shortened to 'I reckon it has.' No article errors remain after simplification; main issues are fillers and redundancy. Suggestion: Remove filler words and streamline the sentence for fluency.