Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memories and learn about new places. For example, landscape photos remind me of trips I’ve taken, and street scenes tell me about local life. Therefore, photography is both a hobby and a way to gather information.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, fix grammar and use specific details. Use a clear topic sentence stating preference (urban or rural), then give 1–2 specific reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'for example.' Avoid vague phrases and incomplete lists.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open landscapes and natural scenery. For example, you can see wide fields, different kinds of trees, and quiet country roads, which feel more peaceful than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Give a complete, specific answer. State your preference clearly, then provide at least one concrete reason or example. Avoid hesitation words and finish your thought within a couple of sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the culture and locations. For instance, I enjoy photographing local festivals and historic towns that I know well, which makes composing shots easier and more meaningful.

× And uh, yes, I like taking picture in different view because it gives me baby, it gives me the monologue also the information that I really want to need so.

✓ And uh, yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they give me ... they give me the dialogue and the information that I really need.

Errors: 'picture' and 'view' should be plural when speaking generally ('pictures', 'views'). 'gives me baby' and 'monologue' appear incorrect semantically; likely intended 'gives me the dialogue' or 'gives me ideas' — here corrected to 'dialogue' as plausible. Also 'want to need' is redundant; use 'need'. Suggestion: Make count nouns plural when speaking about general activities; avoid redundant verb combinations like 'want to need'. Use clear nouns for intended meaning. Note: Only pluralization and redundancy addressed per list.

× In my perspective view I prefer rural area be because it gives you another view.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer rural areas because they give you a different view.

Errors: 'In my perspective view' is awkward; correct phrase is 'From my perspective'. 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. 'be' is extraneous and ungrammatical. 'another view' is better as 'a different view'. Suggestion: Use standard prepositional phrase 'from my perspective', pluralize when generalizing, and remove unnecessary words. Note: Addressed preposition and plural issues.

× Then there are many trees or something else like many kinds of bars you can see there also there is many kinds of.

✓ There are many trees and other things, like many kinds of birds you can see there.

Errors: 'there are many trees' is correct but sentence fragment 'or something else' is vague; 'bars' is likely a misspelling of 'birds'. 'there is many kinds of' is ungrammatical—use 'there are many kinds of' because 'kinds' is plural. Suggestion: Use 'there are' with plural nouns and choose precise words; keep sentence structure concise. Note: Focused on plural agreement and word choice.

× Yes, I prefer uh, in my own countries because, uh, because.

✓ Yes, I prefer my own country.

Errors: 'in my own countries' uses plural 'countries' incorrectly when referring to the speaker's single country; use singular 'country'. Also remove unnecessary filler 'in' after 'prefer'—say 'prefer my own country'. Suggestion: Use singular when referring to one country and avoid redundant phrases.