Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases, and correct verb agreement and word choice (e.g., "passes" → "pass", "a really special" → "really special" or "a special way"). Add one specific example to support your idea and use a linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, when I take photos of sunsets at the beach, I can remember the colours and the people I was with, so those photos bring back the whole experience.

Sugerencia: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, and be specific. Use a clear topic sentence that states your preference, then give reasons with linking words. Fix word choice ("bus areas" likely "busy areas"), tenses, and awkward phrases ("unrealistic" → "breathtaking" or "stunning").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas to busy urban places because they feel calmer and more scenic. For instance, I especially enjoy photographing beaches and the sea, as the wide views and colours are breathtaking and make my photos more memorable.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct country names and grammar. Start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific reasons. Replace incorrect words ("mural" → maybe "abroad" or a specific place) and avoid vague phrases like "the other countries one". Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I find foreign landscapes more exciting and different from what I know. For example, I have never been abroad, so visiting places like the United States or coastal towns in Europe would offer exotic scenery and new photo opportunities.

× Yes, I definitely like it because it's a really special to capture the moments that passes by every single second and we can recall the memory after the moment we experience. That is so awesome.

✓ Yes, I definitely like it because it's really special to capture the moments that pass by every single second, and we can recall the memories after the moments we experience. That is so awesome.

Errors: 'a really special' uses an unnecessary article and adjective combination; use 'really special' instead. 'passes' is incorrect for plural 'moments' so use 'pass' (subject-verb agreement). 'the memory' and 'the moment' should be plural to match 'moments' and to indicate repeated instances: use 'memories' and 'moments'. Suggestion: remove the article before 'really special', make nouns and verbs agree in number, and use plural forms when referring to multiple instances.

× I loved the bus areas but I slightly more preferred the rural areas, especially the sea, the beach because it is so unrealistic to see.

✓ I like busier areas, but I slightly prefer rural areas, especially the sea and the beach, because they seem so unreal to me.

Errors: 'loved' and 'preferred' are past tense but the question asks about general preference, so use present tense 'like' and 'prefer'. 'bus areas' is unclear and likely intended as 'busier areas'; change to 'busier areas'. Word order: 'slightly more preferred' is awkward; use 'slightly prefer' or 'prefer slightly more'. 'the sea, the beach' should be joined and plural reference adjusted: use 'the sea and the beach' or 'the sea and beach' and pronoun agreement 'they seem' not 'it is'. 'unrealistic to see' is unnatural; use 'seem so unreal to me'. Suggestion: use present simple for general habits, correct comparative/adjective usage, and ensure pronoun agreement.

× I prefer views in other countries because I have never been to the mural or America. That is quite exotic for me so I would see more of the other countries one.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have never been to Europe or America. That is quite exotic for me, so I would like to see more of other countries.

Errors: 'mural' is likely a misspelling of 'Europe' or another place; choose a plausible correction 'Europe'. 'That is quite exotic for me' refers to plural places, so keep it but improve flow. 'I would see more of the other countries one' is ungrammatical: use 'I would like to see more of other countries' or 'I would like to see more countries'. Also use present simple 'prefer' for general preference. Suggestion: correct place name, use natural collocations like 'I would like to see' and avoid redundant 'the' before 'other countries'.