Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and add one specific example with linking words to make the answer coherent. Keep it under five sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., 'landscapes', 'scenery') to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views because I enjoy travelling and discovering new landscapes. For example, when I cycle along the coast I often stop to photograph the beaches and cliffs, which I find very peaceful. This helps me remember the trip and share the scenery with friends.

Sugerencia: Be decisive and correct grammar: answer directly (I prefer...), avoid hesitation, correct noun forms (a rural area or rural areas), and give a brief reason using a linking word (because/so) plus a specific detail.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer wide-open landscapes and ocean views that feel relaxing. For instance, I enjoy coastal villages where the sea and cliffs provide dramatic photo opportunities.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and hesitations: state a clear preference (or balance) and explain with a concise reason. Use linking words (however / although / and) and give one concrete example of a place at home or abroad you want to visit.

Ejemplo: I mainly enjoy the views in my country because I'm familiar with local landscapes and culture; however, I also like travelling abroad to discover different scenery. For example, I’d love to visit Norway to see fjords and compare them with the coastal views near my hometown.

× I really enjoy riding a bike sometimes in great views and mountains and beaches, umm, it is really peaceful to me.

✓ I really enjoy riding a bike sometimes in areas with great views, such as mountains and beaches; it is really peaceful for me.

The original sentence misused the phrase 'in great views' and had a comma splice joining independent clauses. Use 'areas with great views' or 'places with great views' and provide examples with 'such as'. Also use a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid comma splice. 'Peaceful to me' is more naturally 'peaceful for me.' Maintain gerund 'riding' correctly.

× I would say that they, uh, depends on day-to-day.

✓ I would say that it depends on day to day.

Subject and verb must agree: 'it depends' is correct because the subject is 'that' clause referring to preference, singular. 'Day-to-day' should be 'day to day' in this context without hyphens, or 'from day to day.' Remove filler 'they' which creates mismatch.

× I really enjoy a rural areas with a lot of sceneries and uh, ocean views.

✓ I really enjoy rural areas with a lot of scenery and ocean views.

Use plural noun 'areas' without the article 'a'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use 'scenery' not 'sceneries.' Remove unnecessary article 'a.' Keeps parallel structure with 'ocean views.'

× I would say that I really enjoy the views in my country, but at the same time, I really love to, uh, explore more and more, uh, and, uh, go to new places and uh, uh, enjoy more views.

✓ I would say that I really enjoy the views in my country, but at the same time I love to explore new places and see more views.

Original sentence has excessive fillers and repetitive phrasing ('more and more', 'and, uh,'). Simplify to clear parallel verbs: 'love to explore' and 'see more views.' Remove redundant commas and filler sounds to improve clarity and fluency.